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【題目】英國姐妹學(xué)校的老師Dr.Smith將要來你們學(xué)校開展教學(xué)活動。來華前，他給你們年級的學(xué)生寫了一封公開信，調(diào)查需求情況。

Dear students,

I'm so excited about my trip to China next month.I can't wait to see your school and give my lessons there.Just a few things I'd like to know.What do you hope to get out of these lessons?What topics do you find most interesting? And what kind of teachers do you like?

I am looking forward to your reply.

Sincerely yours,

Paul Smith

假定你是李華，請根據(jù)來信內(nèi)容代表同學(xué)們寫一封回信，內(nèi)容包括：

1.歡迎Dr.Smith的來臨；

2.回復(fù)信中提出的問題；

3.表達對他到來的期盼。

注意：

1.詞數(shù)100-120字左右；

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Dear Dr.Smith,

My classmates and I became very excited hearing you would give us lessons.

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Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Dr.Smith,

My classmates and I became very excited hearing you would give us lessons.The purpose of writing is to reply to the questions in your letter.

As for what we hope to get out of your classes,we're most interested in improving our spoken English and increasing our vocabulary.We are also keen to learn more about the customs and culture of your country,especially what kids of our own age there are interested in.Would you tell us what movies and music they like?How about their school life?Our teachers here in China are usually very kind and hardworking,but also very strict,so we hope that our lessons with you will be a little more interesting and lively than those we are used to.

We can't wait for you to arrive.We're really looking forward to your lessons.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】本篇書面表達屬于應(yīng)用文，要求寫一封回信。

第1步：根據(jù)提示可知，本篇為一封回信；英國姐妹學(xué)校的老師Dr.Smith將要來你們學(xué)校開展教學(xué)活動，來華前，他給你們年級的學(xué)生寫了一封公開信，調(diào)查需求情況；根據(jù)來信內(nèi)容代表同學(xué)們寫一封回信，內(nèi)容包括：歡迎Dr.Smith的來臨，回復(fù)信中提出的問題，表達對他到來的期盼。時態(tài)應(yīng)為一般現(xiàn)在時。

第2步：根據(jù)寫作要求，確定關(guān)鍵詞（組），如：reply（答復(fù)），spoken English（口語），increase our vocabulary（增加詞匯量），customs and culture（習(xí)俗和文化），kind and hardworking（善良而勤奮），strict（嚴(yán)厲的）等。

第3步：根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。

第4步：連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的。

【亮點說明】

范文內(nèi)容完整，語言規(guī)范，語篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)。作者在范文中使用了較多高級表達方式，如賓語從句As for what we hope to get out of your classes,we're most interested in improving our spoken English and increasing our vocabulary.；比較級及定語從句so we hope that our lessons with you will be a little more interesting and lively than those (that) we are used to；非謂語動詞的運用The purpose of writing is to reply to the questions in your letter.全文中沒有中國式英語的句式，顯示了很高的駕馭英語的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、層次分明，上下句轉(zhuǎn)換自然，為文章增色添彩。