Question

【題目】假定你是李華，你的好朋友Dickon 就如何提高寫作水平征求你的意見(jiàn)。你給他寫了一封信，給出了兩個(gè)建議：一個(gè)是建議他學(xué)好習(xí)慣用語(yǔ)和句子結(jié)構(gòu)并用他們?cè)炀洌涣硪粋�(gè)是建議他多閱讀和背誦一些好文章。

注意：

1. 詞數(shù)100左右，

2. 為使行文連貫，可以適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容；

3. 信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Dickon,

______________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Dickon,

I have received your letter and I am glad to give you some suggestions. I think the most important thing is not to be disappointed. Many students find it difficult to write well. In my opinion, if you want to improve your writing, you can do the following things: First, do some study with set phrases and sentence structures. Keep a list of them and then try to make some sentences with them. Second, read as much as possible. There are many things that can’t be learnt at a time. You must read them in books for many times. Then you’ll be able to use them correctly. So, in order to write well, you must learn to read much. Finally, you’d better recite some good passages.

Good luck to you in your writing.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】本篇作文是一篇建議信。假定你是李華，你的好朋友Dickon 就如何提高寫作水平征求你的意見(jiàn)。你給他寫了一封信，給出了兩個(gè)建議：一個(gè)是建議他學(xué)好習(xí)慣用語(yǔ)和句子結(jié)構(gòu)并用他們?cè)炀�；另一個(gè)是建議他多閱讀和背誦一些好文章。建議信要寫得簡(jiǎn)明扼要、目的明確、具有合理性和說(shuō)服力。

亮點(diǎn)：本篇作文一開始就用一個(gè)并列句點(diǎn)出建議的原因： “I have received your letter and I am glad to give you some suggestions.”和賓語(yǔ)從句“I think the most important thing is not to be disappointed. Many students find it difficult to write well.”道出建議的原因。接著用一個(gè)短語(yǔ)“In my opinion,”引出自己的建議，使用一個(gè)條件狀語(yǔ)從句“if you want to improve your writing, you can do the following things:” 展開建議的內(nèi)容。再使用順序連接詞“First，…second，…then，…so，…finally”把要點(diǎn)連接起來(lái)，同時(shí)使用各種句式，如2個(gè)祈使句“First, do some study with set phrases and sentence structures. Keep a list of them and then try to make some sentences with them. Second, read as much as possible”，一個(gè)定語(yǔ)從句“There are many things that can’t be learnt at a time.”同時(shí)還使用一些提建議的語(yǔ)句如“you must…”“you’d better…”等，使文章一氣呵成，如流水般，簡(jiǎn)明扼要，目的明確，具有很強(qiáng)的說(shuō)服力。