Question

【題目】閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一個(gè)完整的故事。

It’s a perfect family summer seaside holiday. Occasionally some white clouds floated across the blue sky. The sandy beach was soft and comfortable. The water was glistering in the morning sunlight and the surf was cool on their feet as Krin and Paula leisurely walked along the water edge. The brother and sister began to make some sandcastles. Not far away, mother sat under a big umbrella, reading a book with a bottle of lemonade in her hand. Father was busy exchanging a few words of greetings with the strangers he met on the beach.

Suddenly, Krin spotted some pieces of seashells lying scattered on the picturesque beach and small holes stretching along it where the crabs had hidden. He immediately invited Paula to collect shells and search the holes together with him. They were having a ball exploring what appeared to be a never-ending beach.

After a while, they stopped and looked back. Their parents and the umbrellas, beach chairs, and crowds were a long way off. But just ahead, hidden amongst sea grape trees stood a run-down house that seemed to be out of repair for years. It appeared to be unoccupied. Curious, they went to investigate.

The front steps to the doorway of the house creaked (嘎吱作響) as they carefully climbed up them, so did the porch when they stepped onto it. The dusty windows and porch railing (門廊 欄桿) were badly weathered and broken. The front door was half open so they squeezed through and cautiously entered. The place was in a total mess, covered with dust, sand, dead leaves, and overturned furniture. They’d taken but a few steps when the door unexpectedly slammed shut behind them.

Scared, Krin and Paula were frozen to the spot. But before they could even utter something like “Oh-oh,” the windows abruptly closed, too. And if this wasn’t scary enough, the stairs to the second floor creaked loudly. When a light in the back bedroom flickered (搖曳), that was absolutely the final straw.

注意：1. 所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；

2. 應(yīng)使用5個(gè)以上短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)；

3. 續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語(yǔ)已為你寫好；

4. 續(xù)寫完成后，請(qǐng)用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)。

Paragraph 1:

“Let’s get out of here, Paula!” screamed Krin. __________________________________________________

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Paragraph 2:

Out they ran, all the way back to those wonderful umbrellas, beach chairs, and crowds. _________________

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Answer 1

【答案】Paragraph 1:

“Let’s get out of here, Paula!” screamed Krin. But it seemed that Paula didn't hear anything, and much to his horror, Krin spotted his sister standing there, with her frightened eyes staring at the swinging light and the creaking stairs. For a moment, a desperate and terrible silence spread through the house. Krin almost felt his blood frozen in his chest as he saw what was happening around. After seemingly a long time, his mind began to race again, trying to think how they could break down the closed door and escape. Immediately, he grabbed hold of his sister's hand, dashed to the front door, and in the meanwhile let out a cry, "Come on, Paula...." But bad luck for poor Krin, he tripped and fell before they got out of the haunted house.

Paragraph 2:

Out ran they , all the way back to those wonderful umbrellas, beach chairs, and crowds. "Did you see what it was?" Paula said to Krin. “whatever it is, I don't want to go back.” Krin said. Then they calmed down for a while, went back to their parents, and told them about their experience. But the parents just blamed them for their running around without permission and didn't believe what they said. But in any case, they came to the conclusion that children should not wander into old run-down houses.

【解析】

這是一篇讀后續(xù)寫作文。

通過閱讀所給文章可知，兄妹倆 Krin and Paula 與父母在海灘上愉快地度假，在海葡萄樹叢中，兄妹倆發(fā)現(xiàn)一幢年久失修的房子。出于好奇心，他們決定進(jìn)去一探究竟，他們進(jìn)入了房子發(fā)現(xiàn)里面非常雜亂，到處是灰塵、枯葉和翻倒的家具，他們還沒走幾步，身后的房門就突然砰地一聲關(guān)上，窗戶也突然關(guān)上，兄妹倆嚇得呆住了。而更令他們恐懼的是通往二樓的樓梯嘎吱聲大作，并且從后面臥室里透出搖曳的光亮。

續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，第一段段首句： Krin 尖叫道：“讓我們跑出去！”原文已交代前門和窗戶都案然關(guān)上了，而更令他們恐懼的是通往二樓的樓梯嘎吱聲大作，從后面臥室里透出搖曳的光亮。所以第一段的情節(jié)最好由此展開，續(xù)寫兄妹倆是如何在極度恐懼的心情下逃出房子的，尤其關(guān)注他們面對(duì)恐懼時(shí)的心理和動(dòng)作描寫。第二段段首句： Krin 和 Paula 已經(jīng)逃出了房子，通過段首句 “wonderful” 一詞可知他們已安全回到了沙灘上父母的身邊。那么，他們會(huì)交流些什么？父母有何回應(yīng)？他們從這次經(jīng)歷中有何感悟？

續(xù)寫時(shí)要求使用5個(gè)以上短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)增加了寫作難度，我們要熟悉所給劃線詞語(yǔ)，恰當(dāng)?shù)臅r(shí)候加以運(yùn)用。最后還要注意所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；續(xù)寫完成后，請(qǐng)用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)。按要求完成寫作任務(wù)。