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3．留意一下我們的周邊，可以發(fā)現(xiàn)陪讀現(xiàn)象已蔚然成風(fēng)．請你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)寫一篇短文，內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括：
1．簡要描述陪讀現(xiàn)象．
2．分析父母陪讀的原因（2至3個）．
3．發(fā)表你對此的看法．
注意：詞數(shù)100-120詞．
These parents are willing to leave their hometown，even quit their jobs to follow their children into the campus．Most of them rent an apartment nearby so as to take good care of their children．Parents consider it necessary to offer a better living condition to the kids．Meanwhile，it can allow them to keep track of the kids'academic performance．
Nevertheless，what they've ignored is that it will get their kids into the habit of being dependent．Thus，they will never develop the ability of self-control in the future．
Trust leads to independence．So it seems to me that parents should create room for children's growth and study in order to ensure their overall development．．

Answer 1

分析 本文是提綱作文，根據(jù)所給提示關(guān)于陪讀現(xiàn)象寫一篇短文．寫作要點(diǎn)：1．簡要描述陪讀現(xiàn)象． 2．分析父母陪讀的原因（2至3個）．3．發(fā)表你對此的看法．屬提綱作文．在寫作時(shí)人稱以第三人稱為主．時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來時(shí)為主．重要短語：be willing to （愿意做某事），quit jobs （放棄工作），so as to （目的是），take care of（照顧），offer sth to sb（提供某物給某人），allow sb to do sth（允許某人做某事），keep track of （跟蹤），get into the habit of （養(yǎng)成…習(xí)慣），lead to （導(dǎo)致），in order to（為了）．

解答 These parents are willing to leave their hometown，even quit their jobs to follow their children into the campus．Most of them rent an apartment nearby so as to take good care of their children．【高分句型】Parents consider it necessary to offer a better living condition to the kids．Meanwhile，it can allow them to keep track of the kids'academic performance．（描述陪讀現(xiàn)象）
 Nevertheless，what they've ignored is that it will get their kids into the habit of being dependent．【高分句型】Thus，they will never develop the ability of self-control in the future．（分析父母陪讀的原因）
 Trust leads to independence．So it seems to me that parents should create room for children's growth and study in order to ensure their overall development．【高分句型】（發(fā)表看法）

點(diǎn)評 提綱作文在寫作時(shí)要注意內(nèi)容是否包含了所有要點(diǎn)．寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次，平時(shí)需注意積累短語和重要句型．