Question

假如你是李華，你的筆友Tom最近發(fā)來(lái)E-mail說(shuō)他最近學(xué)習(xí)狀態(tài)不佳。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列要點(diǎn)，給Tom回復(fù)E-mail，給他介紹幾個(gè)自我激勵(lì)的方法。可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫

詞數(shù)在100左右。

提示：1. 每天花十五分鐘做自己最喜歡的事；

2. 隨身攜帶紙和筆，每天至少記下一件讓你感到驕傲的事情；

3. 停止負(fù)面思考，專注于解決學(xué)習(xí)問(wèn)題。

參考詞匯：自我激勵(lì) self-motivate v. 負(fù)面的negative

                                                                                

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Tom,

How are you recently? If you are still having trouble in learning, I hope these simple ways of self-motivation will help you:

First, you spend 15 minutes doing the things that you like most each day. As for me, it will be watering flowers after supper, or playing chess against the computer, and things like this.

Second, always carry a pen and a piece of paper so as to write down what you are proud of at any time. Every day you have to write at least one thing.

Third, stop negative thinking and focus on solving study problems.

Please do try these and I hope all goes well with you.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇提綱作文，需要寫的內(nèi)容已經(jīng)給出，但是寫作時(shí)不要僅僅對(duì)要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行生硬的翻譯，而是要添加些內(nèi)容，使文章看起來(lái)更充實(shí)，要組成一篇通順連貫的短文，一定要談?wù)勛约旱目捶�。需要注意緊扣文章主題，給出的要點(diǎn)都需要包括，缺一不可。寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問(wèn)題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。同時(shí)注意要求的字?jǐn)?shù)，不要太多也不要太少。

考點(diǎn)：提綱作文

點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文屬于提綱作文，動(dòng)筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。