Question

假如你校要舉辦一次主題為“朋友”的英語(yǔ)演講比賽，請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇120詞左右的演講稿，
開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)人總詞數(shù)。要點(diǎn)如下：
1.朋友的真諦，尊重并信任朋友；2.擇友的標(biāo)準(zhǔn)；3.如何對(duì)待朋友，至少兩點(diǎn)；
4.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；5.文中不得透露個(gè)人姓名和學(xué)校名稱。
Good morning, everyone. I'd like to share my ideas about friends with you

Answer 1

Good morning, everyone. I'd like to share my ideas about friends with you
Friends are the people who can share our happiness and sorrow. As friends, respect and trust are the most important factors. They will accept you for who you are without trying to change you. Trust is another aspect. A true friend will be honest and be someone you can depend on.
When it comes to making friends, I would like to make friends with those who are kind, honest and responsible.
But how to treat friends is the key to making good friends.  First, understand them more. I usually put myself in their shoes so that we can share lots of ideas together. Second, listen to them more. I like listening and talking things over with them.
Thanks for listening.

試題分析：試題貼近考生實(shí)際生活，給出的要點(diǎn)比較簡(jiǎn)略，主要圍繞“朋友”這個(gè)話題展開(kāi)，其中如何對(duì)待朋友，要求給出自己的觀點(diǎn)，屬于半開(kāi)放性話題,故需要自由發(fā)揮的地方較多.需要注意不要偏離文章中心.在寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意把握好以下幾點(diǎn)：(1)書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范，卷面整潔。(2)行文緊湊，過(guò)渡自然。(3)要點(diǎn)完整，表達(dá)清楚。(4)語(yǔ)法正確，時(shí)態(tài)準(zhǔn)確。(5)用詞無(wú)誤，控制得當(dāng)(120詞之間)。(6)認(rèn)真復(fù)查，胸有成竹。尤其是如何對(duì)待朋友，部分要求給出自己的建議，要注意不要偏離文章中心
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】(1)使用一些如Firstly,second,等承接詞進(jìn)行連接,層次清晰。(2)詞組的使用和多變的高級(jí)句式：depend on.Friends are the people who can share our happiness and sorrow. 這句話用了定語(yǔ)從句， They will accept you for who you are without trying to change you. 這句話用了賓語(yǔ)從句，When it comes to making friends, I would like to make friends with those who are kind, honest and responsible.這句話用了固定句型和定語(yǔ)從句，I usually put myself in their shoes so that we can share lots of ideas together.這句話用了結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)從句。