Question

【題目】短文改錯

請修改下面的短文。短文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(∧)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(\)劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2. 只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計分。

It is well-known that good habits do us good. Entered high school, I took delight in having fast food and often eat too much. In the end, I was so serious overweight that I suffered a lot from my awkward appearance. It made matters worse was the fact that my classmates made a fun of me at times. From now on, I made up my mind to avoiding snacks. In the meanwhile, I took off jogging to lose weight. To my surprise, it was not long until I did succeed in creating my new appearance. Only then I start to appreciate the importance of developing a good habit.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】Entered → Entering

【2】eat → ate

【3】serious → seriously

【4】It → What

【5】去掉a

【6】now → then

【7】avoiding → avoid

【8】off → up

【9】until → before

【10】I 前加did

【解析】

【1】Entered → Entering 考查非謂語動詞。句意：當我進入高中，我以吃快餐為樂并經常吃很多。與后面用逗號隔開，沒有連詞，故判斷這里應該用非謂語動詞，根據(jù)與主語是主動關系，故要用動詞的-ing形式。

【2】eat → ate 考查動詞的時態(tài)。and連接 took與eat，是并列的關系，再根據(jù)敘述的是過去發(fā)生的事情，故用一般過去時ate。

【3】serious → seriously 考查副詞。修飾形容詞overweight要用副詞，表示程度，故把serious改為seriously。

【4】It → What 考查主語從句。句意：使事情更糟糕的是我的同學經常取笑我。What引導主語從句，表示“什么”，在主語從句中作主語。

【5】去掉a 考查動詞短語。make fun of sb取笑某人。

【6】now → then 考查固定短語。from now on 從現(xiàn)在開始，from then on 從那時起。

【7】avoiding → avoid 考查動詞短語。make up one’s mind to do 下定決心做某事。

【8】off → up 考查動詞短語。take up從事某事。

【9】until → before 考查連詞。not long before沒過多久。

【10】I 前加did 考查部分倒裝。only+then+部分倒裝，故在I 前加did。

考點 ：短文改錯。