Question

1．在高中學(xué)習(xí)生活中，內(nèi)容豐富，形式多樣的主題班會(huì)常能給我們帶來啟示和思考，為我們的成長指明方向．請(qǐng)描述高中時(shí)期一次令你記憶深刻的主題班會(huì)，根據(jù)下列要點(diǎn)完成短文．
  1．班會(huì)的主題
  2．老師的具體要求和做法
  3．班會(huì)對(duì)你積極的影響（不少于兩點(diǎn)）
注意：1．字?jǐn)?shù)100字左右；        2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
Class meetings of different themes and forms always function as guidance on our life and study．
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Answer 1

分析 這是一篇關(guān)于主題班會(huì)的作文．根據(jù)題目要求可知用第一人稱和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)．內(nèi)容包括：一主題班會(huì)的作用；二記憶深刻的班會(huì)的主題，老師的具體要求和做法；三班會(huì)積極的影響．
高分句型：
1．What strikes me most is a class meeting themed"Everybody shines"．句子里What strikes me most 是主語從句，表示"最打動(dòng)我的是"；themed"Everybody shines"．是 a class meeting 的定語，表示"以每個(gè)人都有閃光點(diǎn)為主題"．
最打動(dòng)我的是一次以每個(gè)人都有閃光點(diǎn)為主題的班會(huì)．
2．Having listened to each presentation attentively，I suddenly realized that everybody had his own shining qualities，which might sometimes be shadowed by his shortcomings．句子里Having listened to each presentation attentively是現(xiàn)在分詞的完成式做狀語；that everybody had his own shining qualities，是 I suddenly realized 的賓語從句；which might sometimes be shadowed by his shortcomings是非限制性定語從句．
聽完每個(gè)人的演講，我突然意識(shí)到每個(gè)人都有閃光點(diǎn)，這些閃光點(diǎn)可能有時(shí)候會(huì)被他的缺點(diǎn)所掩蓋．

解答 Class meetings of different themes and forms always function as guidance on our life and study．（主題班會(huì)的作用）What strikes me most is a class meeting themed"Everybody shines"．【高分句型一】Our head teacher proposed that we write down the strengths of our deskmates from our perspectives．Then we were required to exchange ideas with the whole class．Having listened to each presentation attentively，I suddenly realized that everybody had his own shining qualities，which might sometimes be shadowed by his shortcomings．【高分句型二】（記憶深刻的班會(huì)的主題，老師的具體要求和做法）
    This class meeting has a great influence on my evaluation of others．We are accustomed to pointing out others'weaknesses，overwhelmed by a feeling of superiority．However，it's more important to acknowledge and learn from others'strengths with a modest attitude．（班會(huì)積極的影響）

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寫作的注意事項(xiàng)：
第一步：審題，確定體裁格式、主體時(shí)態(tài)、中心人稱和內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，避免填表式或履歷表式表達(dá)．
第二步：擬定提綱，創(chuàng)造良好的開端；敘述得體，布局謀篇；巧妙過渡，完美結(jié)尾．
第三步：遣詞造句，套用句型，上下銜接，地道表達(dá)，行文成篇（注意"參考詞匯"的提示作用）．