Question

假定英主事課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請您修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語文錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜錢（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：

1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2．只充許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

Mr. Johnson is a hardworking teacher. Every day, he spends too much time with his work. With little sleep and hardly any break, so he works from morning till night. Hard work have made him very ill. “He has ruined his healthy. We are worried about him.” That is which other teachers say. Yesterday afternoon. I paid visit to Mr. Johnson. I was eager to see him, but outside her room I stopped. I had to calm myself down. Quietly I step into the room. I saw him lying in bed, looking at some of the picture we had taken together. I understood that he missed us just as many as we missed him.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

 with→on

 去掉so

 have→has

 healthy→health

 which→what

 paid 后加 a

 her→his

 step→stepped

 picture→pictures

 many→much

【解析】

試題分析：本篇短文介紹了一個兢兢業(yè)業(yè)工作的老師--Mr Johnson。他每天把時間都用在工作上，睡眠很少也幾乎不休息以至于病倒了。學生們和其他老師都很擔心他，當作者去探望他的時候，他卻正在病床上看和學生們一起的合影。。。

 考查動詞搭配。he spends too much time with his work. 固定搭配spend money / time on sth. 所以把介詞with改為on。

 考查連詞用法。With little sleep and hardly any break, so he works from morning till night. 句中so 是連詞應該連接兩個句子，而前面With little sleep and hardly any break是介詞短語，所以把so去掉。

 考查主謂一致。Hard work have made him very ill. 句中hard work 是不可數(shù)名詞，所以謂語動詞要用單數(shù)形式，所以把 have改為has。

 考查名詞用法。He has ruined his healthy . 物主代詞his 后應該跟名詞，所以把healthy改為health。

 考查名詞性從句的連接詞。That is which other teachers say.  that is 后是表語從句，which意思是“哪個，哪些”，應該有選擇范圍，所以把which改為what。

 考查冠詞用法。I paid visit to Mr. Johnson.   pay a visit to sb是固定短語 “拜訪某人” ， paid 后加不定冠詞 a 。

 考查代詞用法。I was eager to see him, but outside her room I stopped. 從文章可知作者去拜訪Mr.Johnson，所以把 her改為his。

 考查動詞時態(tài)。Quietly I step into the room. 文章是敘述過去的事情，所以step改為stepped。

 考查名詞單復數(shù)。looking at some of the picture we had taken together. Picture是可數(shù)名詞，而且前面有some 修飾，所以把picture改為pictures。

 考查副詞用法he missed us just as many as we missed him. 此處修飾動詞miss應該用副詞，many不能修飾動詞，所以把many改為much。

考點：考查短文改錯。