【題目】短文改錯(cuò)

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下便條。便條中共有10處錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加，刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏詞符號(hào)（∧ ），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除；把多余的詞 用斜線（ \ ）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1；每處錯(cuò)誤及修改均僅限一詞；

2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

Tom is my good friend he was born to a poor family. His mother has been suffering a serious disease for many years. Life is too tough for him that he once nearly dropped out school for his family couldn’t afford his schooling. However, Tom, a strong-minded boy, was not afraid of the difficulties that he has been facing. Instead, he studies more harder than the other students in our class, because he believes that only through learn can he have a chance to let his parents live the better life. Now, Tom has become one of the top student in our school.

From Tom experience, I know our positive and determined attitude is the best weapon we can use it to fight against the challenges in life, because nothing is impossible for a willing heart.

【答案】

【1】he改為who

【2】too改為so

【3】out后加of

【4】was改為is

【5】more改為much

【6】learn改為learning

【7】the改為a

【8】students

【9】Tom改為Tom's

【10】刪除use后的it

【解析】

試題分析：本文屬于記敘文，介紹了我最好的朋友Tom與生活中的困難做斗爭(zhēng)，在學(xué)習(xí)上取得了很大的成功。從他身上，我了解到積極且堅(jiān)定的態(tài)度是我們戰(zhàn)勝一切困難最好的武器。

【1】he改為who 考查定語從句。本題定語從句的先行詞是my good friend，關(guān)系代詞who指代先行詞在句中作主語。

【2】too改為so 考查固定句式。句式:so...that....如此...以至于....；連詞that引導(dǎo)結(jié)果狀語從句。句意：對(duì)他來說生活是如此艱難以至于他曾經(jīng)因?yàn)楦恫黄饘W(xué)費(fèi)幾乎輟學(xué)。

【3】out后加of 考查固定搭配。短語drop out of school輟學(xué)；名詞school作為短語drop out of的賓語。句意：對(duì)他來說生活是如此艱難以至于他曾經(jīng)因?yàn)楦恫黄饘W(xué)費(fèi)幾乎輟學(xué)。

【4】was改為is 考查時(shí)態(tài)。全文使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)介紹我的好朋友Tom的事情，本句也應(yīng)該使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，所以使用is。

【5】more改為much 考查副詞。本句中harder已經(jīng)是比較級(jí)的形式了，所以不能再使用more修飾它，而應(yīng)該使用副詞much修飾harder，表示程度。

【6】learn改為learning 考查動(dòng)名詞。在英語中介詞的后面要接名詞動(dòng)名詞做賓語，所以本句中使用動(dòng)名詞learning做介詞through的賓語。

【7】the改為a 考查固定短語。短語live a better life過著更好的生活。句意：他任務(wù)通過學(xué)習(xí)可以讓他的父母親過更好的生活。

【8】students 考查名詞單復(fù)數(shù)。固定結(jié)構(gòu)“one of+可數(shù)名詞復(fù)數(shù)”意為“....之一”；所以本句中使用復(fù)數(shù)形式students。句意：Tom已經(jīng)成為我們學(xué)校頂尖的學(xué)生之一。

【9】Tom改為Tom's 考查所有格。本句中使用所有格Tom's做定語修飾名詞experience。句意：從Tom的經(jīng)歷，我們知道積極且堅(jiān)定的態(tài)度是我們與生活中挑戰(zhàn)進(jìn)行斗爭(zhēng)的最好的武器。

【10】刪除use后的it 考查句中結(jié)構(gòu)。本句是定語從句，先行詞是the best weapon，關(guān)系代詞that指代先行詞作為動(dòng)詞use的賓語，被省略了。也就是說動(dòng)詞use已經(jīng)有了賓語了，所以it是多余的。

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