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2013年10月22日下午，我校學(xué)生會(huì)就1000名家長針對“老師是否應(yīng)該批評學(xué)生”這個(gè)問題進(jìn)行了一次調(diào)查。請用英文寫一份調(diào)查報(bào)告。調(diào)查結(jié)果如下：

38%被調(diào)查者表示反對	反對的理由	1. 會(huì)傷害學(xué)生自尊； 2. 人人都會(huì)犯錯(cuò)，尤其中學(xué)生，老師不必小題大做。
62%被調(diào)查者表示贊同	贊同的理由	1. 是非面前，學(xué)生應(yīng)獲得老師的及時(shí)指正和引導(dǎo)； 2. 但批評的方式與時(shí)機(jī)要恰當(dāng)，而且尤其要注意用語，要以保護(hù)學(xué)生的心靈為根本。

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    On the afternoon of October 22^nd this year, the Students’ Union of our school did a survey among 1000 parents on whether teachers should criticize their students. Among the 1000 parents, 38% of them express their strong disagreement because they believe that if the teachers do this, the relevant students may get mentally hurt. Besides, they also maintain that there is no need for the teachers to take things so seriously since it’s natural for man to error, middle school students in particular. However, the others insist that criticism and timely correction is necessary because middle school students need a guide on right and wrong, but meanwhile, they emphasize the importance of tactful criticism. Furthermore, those supporters express their voice that teachers should especially watch out their words, making sure not to hurt the students involved.