假如你是李華，你校外教Johnny準(zhǔn)備周末去附近的云霧山探險(xiǎn)旅游，寫信向你詢問注意事項(xiàng)。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下列提示，給他回一封電子郵件。

1. 準(zhǔn)備一張?jiān)旗F山的地圖；

2. 查詢當(dāng)?shù)貙?shí)時(shí)天氣，帶上必要的衣物、食品、藥品及手電筒；

3. 必要的話，找一位向?qū)А?/p>

注意：1. 詞數(shù)：100左右；2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3. 開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Johnny,

I’m glad to know that you will travel to and explore Yunwu Mountain. And it’s a great pleasure for me to offer you some advice.

____________________________________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________________________

... Yours,

Li Hua

 

One possible version:

Dear Johnny,

I’m glad to know that you will travel to and explore Yunwu Mountain. And it’s a great pleasure for me to offer you some advice.

First of all, you should prepare a local map of Yunwu Mountain. Before starting, you should surf the Internet to look for some information about the weather on the weekend there so as to take enough clothes and food. Meanwhile, it’s necessary to take a flashlight and some medicines. Because there are few people living in the mountain, it’s good for you to find several friends to make this exciting journey with you together. If a local guide will serve you, it will be even better.

Special care should be taken while you travel in the mountain. I wish you a good time!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：本文是一封電子郵件應(yīng)用文，回復(fù)周末外出注意事項(xiàng)。內(nèi)容提示較詳細(xì)，考生容易把握寫作要求和寫作目的。考生在寫作之前要認(rèn)真審題，給外教回郵件注意語氣要委婉。根據(jù)提示寫作主要有三段內(nèi)容，第一段開門見山表明寫郵件的目的；第二段敘述外出需注意的事項(xiàng)；第三段結(jié)束，總結(jié)全文，表達(dá)自己的祝愿。另外，要注意文章的時(shí)態(tài)，用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和將來時(shí)。人稱用第二人稱單數(shù)。再有就是不能根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容逐字逐句的翻譯形成漢式的英語，應(yīng)該注意句子的銜接，以提高作文的檔次。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】文章符合郵件書信的寫作要求，要點(diǎn)齊全，表達(dá)思路明確，知識(shí)點(diǎn)運(yùn)用恰當(dāng)?shù)轿�，文中使用了非常好的短語和句子為文章增色不少，比如I’m glad to know that…it’s a great pleasure for me to offer you some advice. surf the Internet，so as to，it’s necessary to…; because，if，while 引導(dǎo)的狀語從句；Before starting…省略形式。并注意了句子的銜接如：First of all, Meanwhile等。

考點(diǎn)：應(yīng)用文——郵件

 

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