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8．假設(shè)你是晨光中學(xué)的李津．你的英國筆友Chris得知中國歷時10年按照國際標(biāo)準(zhǔn)設(shè)計開發(fā)，具有獨(dú)立知識產(chǎn)權(quán)的C919大型客機(jī)2017年5月5日在上海浦東國際機(jī)場首次試飛成功，非常感興趣，便寫信給你，希望你介紹相關(guān)情況，請根據(jù)以下提示給他寫一封回信．
要點：
（1）簡單介紹C919大型客機(jī)首次試飛成功引起的反響；
（2）介紹C919大型客機(jī)的概況（C919全長近39米，最大載客人數(shù)168人，最大航程超過5000公里，外觀漂亮，駕駛員視野開闊，機(jī)身更輕，目前己收到來自國內(nèi)外23家航空公司570架訂單）；
（3）表達(dá)對C919大型客機(jī)未來的美好憧憬．
注意：
（1）詞數(shù)不少于100；
（2）可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié)，使內(nèi)容充實，行文連貫；
（3）幵頭和結(jié)尾己給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．
參考詞匯：
大壁客機(jī) large passenger aircraft 首次飛行 maiden flight
獨(dú)立知識產(chǎn)權(quán)：independent intellectual property rights

Dear Chris，
It is great to hear from you．DearChris，
It is great to hear from you．I know you are intrested in the C919 large passenger aircraft which had its maiden flight at the International Airport in Pudong Shanghai on the 5th，May 2017．And its success attracts the attention from all over the world．Now I will introduce something I know about it．
In fact the C919 large passenger aircraft had been researched as the international standard for over ten years in China．Our country has independent intellectual property rights．The aircraft is nearly 39 meters in length and it can carry 168 passengers once．Its longest flight is more than 5000 kilometers．Apart from it beautiful look，a broader view of pilots as well as its lighter weight is its attration．So it is no wonder there are more than 23 airline companies ordering 570 planes of this kind．There is no doubt that this kind of plane can replace Boeing aircraft one day for its high qulity and low price．
I send you a brochure with the letter so that you can know more about the plane．I hope to visit you taking this plane．
Yours
LiJin
Yours，
Lijin．

Answer 1

分析 本文是對C919大型客機(jī)介紹．根據(jù)題目要求可知用第一人稱．用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)介紹C919大型客機(jī)的概況；一般過去時態(tài)介紹它的設(shè)計開發(fā)．內(nèi)容包括：一點明書信主題；二介紹C919大型客機(jī)的概況以及對C919大型客機(jī)未來的美好憧憬；三表達(dá)愿望．
高分句型：
1．I know you are interested in  the C919  large passenger aircraft which had its  maiden flight at the International Airport in Pudong Shanghai on the 5th，May 2017．句子里 which 引導(dǎo)定語從句，代指先行詞the C919  large passenger aircraft．
我知道你對C919大型客機(jī)感興趣，在2017年5月5日這種飛機(jī)在上海浦東國際機(jī)場進(jìn)行了首次試飛行．
2．So it is no wonder there have been more than 23 airline companies from home and abroad ordering 570 planes of this kind up to now．句子里it is no wonder 表示"難怪"，it是形式主語，代指從句there are more than 23 airline companies ordering 570 planes of this kind； up to now．表示"直到現(xiàn)在"．
所以難怪會有來自國內(nèi)外23家航空公司570架訂單了．

解答 Dear Chris，
    It is great to hear from you．I know you are interested in  the C919  large passenger aircraft which had its  maiden flight at the International Airport in Pudong Shanghai on the 5th，May 2017．【高分句型一】And its success attracts  the attention from all over the world．Now I will introduce something I know about it．（點明書信主題）
     In fact the C919  large passenger aircraft began to be designed and researched  as the international standard  over ten years  ago in China．Our country hasindependent intellectual property rights．The aircraft is nearly 39 meters in length and it can carry 168 passengers once．Its longest flight is more than 5000 kilometers．Apart from it beautiful look，a broader view of pilots as well as its lighter weight is very attractive．So it is no wonder there have  been more than 23 airline companies from home and abroad  ordering 570 planes of this kind up to now．【高分句型二】There is no doubt that  this kind of plane will replace Boeing aircraft one day for its high qulity and low price．（介紹C919大型客機(jī)的概況以及對C919大型客機(jī)未來的美好憧憬．）
   I send you a brochure with the letter so that you can know more about the plane．I hope to visit you taking this plane．（表達(dá)愿望）
                                                                                                                                  Yours
                                                                                                                                 LiJin

點評 寫好這類提綱式作文的關(guān)鍵是認(rèn)真分析所給提示信息，靈活運(yùn)用英語知識，采用不同的表達(dá)方式將要點完整地表述出來，并認(rèn)真看圖，圍繞主題，提煉要點，發(fā)揮想象，語言力求準(zhǔn)確、簡潔．選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性．同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次，最后還要認(rèn)真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標(biāo)點誤用等．