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6．此題要求改正所給短文中的錯(cuò)誤．對標(biāo)有題號的每一行作出判斷，如無錯(cuò)誤，在該行右邊的橫線上畫一個(gè)勾（?）；如果有錯(cuò)誤（每行只有一個(gè)錯(cuò)誤），則按下列情況改正：
此行多一詞：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉，在該行右邊橫線上寫出該詞，并也用斜線劃掉．
此行缺一詞：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號（∧），在該行右邊橫線上寫出該加的詞．
此行錯(cuò)一詞：在錯(cuò)詞下劃一橫線，在該行右邊橫線上寫出改正后的詞．
注意：原行沒有錯(cuò)的不要改．
When people think about precious things，they usually think
about money or jewelry．I am not very rich，and I have                  （76）but
something very preciously in my room．It's not a CD player or         （77）precious
a cellphone．It's the view from my window．I'm lucky live               （78）lucky后面to
near a park．My window faces with the tops of the trees in                 （79）去掉with
the park．Below the tree I can see children on the playground，（80）trees
young couples walked quietly，mothers with children，and                  （81）walking
old people sitting on the beach．The whole world is before                   （82）√
their eyes．My classmates like to go online or listen to music，（83）my
but when I have a free time，I just sit on the chair and                           （84）去掉a
enjoyed the most precious thing in my room：the view．                        （85）enjoy．

Answer 1

分析 當(dāng)人們提及珍貴的東西時(shí)，他們通常想到金錢或珠寶．我并不富有，但我的房間里有一些非常珍貴的東西，那就是我窗外的風(fēng)景．我有幸住在公園附近，從窗戶里我可以看到孩子們在操場上玩耍，年輕的夫婦在輕輕散步，媽媽和孩子，老人坐在沙灘上，整個(gè)世界盡收眼底．我的同學(xué)都喜歡上網(wǎng)或聽音樂，但我有空的時(shí)候就喜歡坐在椅子上享受我房間里最珍貴的東西--窗前的風(fēng)景．

解答 When people think about precious things，they usually think
about money or jewelry．I am not very rich，and I have            （76）but
something very preciously in my room．It's not a CD player or  （77）precious
a cellphone．It's the view from my window．I'm lucky live       （78）lucky后面to
near a park．My window faces with the tops of the trees in         （79）去掉with
the park．Below the treeI can see children on the playground，（80）trees
young couples walked quietly，mothers with children，and        （81）walking
old people sitting on the beach．The whole world is before         （82）√
their eyes．My classmates like to go online or listen to music，（83）my
but when I have a free time，I just sit on the chair and               （84）去掉a
enjoyed the most precious thing in my room：the view．            （85）enjoy

76．a(chǎn)nd改為but；考查連詞，結(jié)合上下文分析，句意應(yīng)為"我并不富有，但我的房間里有一些非常珍貴的東西"，可知此處應(yīng)為轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，故用but．           
77．preciously改為precious；考查形容詞，這里用形容詞precious作后置定語，修飾不定代詞something． 
78．lucky后加to；考查動(dòng)詞不定式，be lucky to do是固定短語，意為"有幸作某事"．
79．去with；考查介詞，face作為"面對，面向"講是及物動(dòng)詞，可直接加賓語，故去掉with．                
80．tree改為trees；考查名詞，根據(jù)上文  with the tops of the trees 可知此處trees也要用復(fù)數(shù)形式．       
81．walked改為walking；考查固定搭配，see sb doing 是固定用法，意為"看到某人正在做某事"，文中句子的完整結(jié)構(gòu)應(yīng)為"I see young couples walking quietly"．
82．正確                  
83．their→my；考查物主代詞，結(jié)合上下文分析，句意應(yīng)為"整個(gè)世界都在我的眼前"，所以their要改為my．           
84．去掉a；考查名詞，free time，空閑時(shí)間，是不可數(shù)名詞，故去掉冠詞a．
85．enjoyed改為enjoy；考查動(dòng)詞的時(shí)態(tài)，本文通篇用了一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，根據(jù)句意"我有空的時(shí)候就喜歡坐在椅子上享受我房間里最珍貴的東西"可知此處也要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，故enjoyed改為enjoy．

點(diǎn)評 整體理解短文，充分運(yùn)用所學(xué)的基礎(chǔ)知識，包括一些實(shí)詞和虛詞的用法，固定短語搭配，習(xí)慣性用法，結(jié)合上下文整體關(guān)系，找出錯(cuò)誤并加以修正．