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第二節(jié)書面表達 (滿分35分)
2010年上海 “世博會”如期召開，倡導“城市讓生活更美好”，假設你是李華，請你向?qū)W校英語報投稿，談談你心中的理想城市。內(nèi)容包括如下幾點：
1）交通    2）自然環(huán)境   3）人文環(huán)境 ( 如人際關系 )
注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右，開頭語和結(jié)尾已為你寫好；2. 可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
Dear editor,
With Shanghai Expo being held as expected, the theme of “Better City, Better Life” has been become widely known all over the world. ______________________________________________
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Best wishes,
Yours,
Li Hua        

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Dear editor, 
With Shanghai Expo being held as expected, the theme “Better City, Better Life” has been widely known all over the world. Here I’m writing to share the idea of my dream city.
In my opinion, a wonderful city should be one that distinguishes in the following aspects. To begin with, an appealing city should provide convenient and comfortable transport, which means people can easily choose whatever ways to travel anywhere. Besides, it should offer people a pleasant environment with plenty of green trees, clean streets as well as fresh air. Last but not least, in a charming city, citizens can enjoy a friendly and harmonious community and are always ready to help and care about each other.
In a word, an attractive city is one highly developed in different areas to make sure people can live happily.
Best wishes,
Yours,
Li Hua

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