Question

【題目】短文改錯（共10小題；每小題1分，滿分10分）

文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及—個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加—個漏字符號(/\)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。 刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(\)劃掉。修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不記分。

Today, more and more high school students have his own blog on the Internet. For one thing, it can provide colorful platform to show their talents, and for another, it is also a way to release their pressure. And this make it popular with high school students. But many parents and teachers hold a same view, think that managing a blog will be a waste of time and energy, while this should be used for study which is their main duty. Personal speaking, I do approve of this activity. Open and organizing an eye-catching blog needs various ability such as writing, designing and so on. Only if that we have those abilities can we make a good blog. But also, we can improve ourselves during the procedure of organizing our blogs.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】his 改為 their

【2】provide 后加a

【3】make 改為 makes

【4】same 改為 different

【5】think 改為 thinking

【6】Personal 改為 Personally

【7】Open 改為 Opening

【8】ability 改為 abilities

【9】去掉 if 后 that

【10】But改為 And

【解析】

試題分析：

【1】現(xiàn)在，越來越多的高中學(xué)生有自己的博客。主語是more and more high school students ，形容詞性物主代詞應(yīng)該是their。

【2】首先，它可以提供一個豐富多彩的平臺可以讓學(xué)生展示他們的才能。Platform是可數(shù)名詞，provide 后加a。

【3】這使得它很受高中生的歡迎。主語是it，謂語是make 改為 makes

【4】根據(jù)下文的：think that managing a blog will be a waste of time and energy,可知很多老師和家長有不同的觀點。 same 改為 different。

【5】很多老師和家長有不同的觀點，認(rèn)為管理博客是浪費時間和精力。這里用現(xiàn)在分詞做伴隨狀語。think 改為 thinking

【6】Personal 改為 Personally，Personally speaking,是固定短語“就我個人而言”。

【7】和organizing 并列做主語的是動名詞Opening。

【8】開放組織一個吸引眼球的博客需要各種各樣的能力。考查名詞“能力”，various后面接名詞復(fù)數(shù)：ability 改為 abilities。

【9】只有我們具備這些能力才能管理好的博客。If引導(dǎo)的是條件狀語從句。

【10】我們在組織博客的過程中，還能夠提高自己。這里和上文是并列關(guān)系：But改為 And