Question

【題目】假如你是李華，請代表全班同學(xué)給英語老師寫一封100個(gè)詞左右的信。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：

1. 課堂上您的微笑，給了我們信心。

2. 若您的課再生動(dòng)有趣些，我們會(huì)更喜歡您。

3. 我們都很優(yōu)秀，希望得到您更多的表揚(yáng)。

4. 請多給我們一些建議，少一些命令。

5. 因?yàn)槟�工作一向很努力，所以要學(xué)會(huì)休息，注意保重自己的身體。

注意：

1. 以第一人稱寫：

2. 參考詞匯：代表 on behalf of； 信心 confidence；合理的 reasonable

3. 開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

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Answer 1

【答案】

Dear teacher,

As your student, I’d like to give you some suggestions on behalf of all my classmates.

First, I want to say I love you. And I want to tell you that the smile on your face in English class gives us confidence. Then, we think we will love you more if you make your lessons more lively and more interesting. Also, we think that we are all excellent and hope to be more often praised by you. What’s more, we’d like you to give us some reasonable suggestions always working very hard, it is quite important for you to learn to have a rest and take care of yourself!

Best wishes to you!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：本文是要代表全班給老師寫一封信，寫信要注意格式和稱呼。本文給出了5個(gè)要點(diǎn)，學(xué)生寫作時(shí)要注意面面俱到。寫作時(shí)要注意時(shí)態(tài)、拼寫，不要犯低級(jí)錯(cuò)誤，使用高級(jí)詞匯來增加文章的可讀性，注意使用平時(shí)學(xué)到的短語和句子結(jié)構(gòu)，注意段落安排，要做到條理清晰。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】文章使用了很好的短語和句子：on behalf of代表，reasonable合理的，have a rest休息， take care of照顧等，it is quite important for you to learn to have a rest and take care of yourself!運(yùn)用了形式主語。文章使用了First，Then，Also，What’s more等表示順序的連接詞，使整篇文章的條理更加清晰，層次分明。