Question

【題目】假定你是李華，你的英國朋友Smith想讓女兒來中國學(xué)習(xí)漢語，給你發(fā)來郵件咨詢哪所學(xué)校更好，請根據(jù)提示給他回一封郵件：

1．推薦光明語言學(xué)校(Guangming Language School)；

2．該校有10多年招收全世界各國學(xué)生的歷史，漢語教學(xué)經(jīng)驗豐富；

3．招收不同教育程度的學(xué)生；

4．課程(curriculum)豐富，講課靈活，生動，有趣。

注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右；

2．可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，以使行文連貫。

Dear Smith，

I’m_glad_to_hear_that_your_daughter_will_come_here_to_learn_Chinese.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ______

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Smith,

I m glad to hear that your daughter wi11 come here to learn Chinese. I d like to recommend Guangming Language Schoo1.

The language schoo1 has more than 10 years of experience in teaching foreign students. The students come from a11 over the wor1d, with different educationa1 1eve1s and background. What s more, the curriculum is rich. Students can learn various courses 1ike spoken Chinese and Chinese cu1 ture. What impresses me most is that the teachers have developed a special teaching method, which can make their classes living and interesting. Most of the fore ign students can speak f1uent Chinese when they I leave schoo1.

I hope you can take my suggest ion into consideration. If you want to know any thing else, don t hesitate to contact me.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本文是一篇提綱類書面表達，要求考生把自己當(dāng)成李華，你的英國朋友Smith想讓女兒來中國學(xué)習(xí)漢語，給你發(fā)來郵件咨詢哪所學(xué)校更好，請根據(jù)提示給他回一封郵件。全文以一般現(xiàn)在時和第三人稱為主。

第1步：審題。根據(jù)提示可知本文是一封電子郵件，介紹 光明語言學(xué)校。全文以一般現(xiàn)在時和第三人稱為主。

第2步：組織要點。推薦光明語言學(xué)校(Guangming Language School)；該校有10多年招收全世界各國學(xué)生的歷史，漢語教學(xué)經(jīng)驗豐富；招收不同教育程度的學(xué)生；課程(curriculum)豐富，講課靈活，生動，有趣。

第3步：根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。

第4步：連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的。

本篇范文結(jié)構(gòu)完美，條理清晰。范文時態(tài)和人稱運用準(zhǔn)確，涵蓋了文字提示要求的所有要點，且有適當(dāng)?shù)膫�人發(fā)揮�？忌�運用了多樣式的句型結(jié)構(gòu)，整篇文章富有變化，并不死板。盡量運用了高級的語法結(jié)構(gòu)，如定語從句…, which can make their classes living and interesting.名詞性從句What impresses me most is that the teachers have developed a special teaching method…這些高級語法結(jié)構(gòu)的運用提升了文章的層次，顯示了很強的駕馭語言的能力。