【題目】請(qǐng)閱讀下面文字,并按照要求用英語(yǔ)寫一篇150詞左右的文章。

假定你是李華,自制一些中國(guó)結(jié)(Chinese knot)。給開網(wǎng)店的美國(guó)朋友 Tom 寫封信,請(qǐng)他代賣,要點(diǎn)包括:

1. 外觀(尺寸、顏色、材料);

2. 象征意義;

3. 價(jià)格。

注意:1. 詞數(shù) 120 左右;

2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫;

3. 開頭語(yǔ)已為你寫好

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【答案】Dear Tom,

How are you doing? I wonder if you could sell some Chinese knots for me. I made them myself with red still threads, cloths and other materials. They look really beautiful in the shape of a diamond, about 5 inches long and 4 inches wide.(外觀)In China, these knots stand for friendship, love and good luck.(象征意義) People can either give them as gifts to friends or hang them in their houses. They are only 12.99 US dollars each.(價(jià)格)If anyone wants to know more about the knots, let them write to me.Also, do let me know if you need further information.

Thank you!

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生寫一封信給開網(wǎng)店的美國(guó)朋友 Tom,請(qǐng)他代賣你的中國(guó)結(jié),要求寫明中國(guó)結(jié)的外觀(尺寸、顏色、材料)、象征意義和價(jià)格。

第一步:審題

體裁:應(yīng)用文

時(shí)態(tài):根據(jù)提示,時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)

結(jié)構(gòu):總分法

總分法指把主題句作為總說,把支持句作為分說,并以這種方式安排所寫內(nèi)容。

要求:1. 外觀(尺寸、顏色、材料);

2. 象征意義;

3. 價(jià)格。

第二步:列提綱 (重點(diǎn)詞組)

I wonder if +從句;sell some Chinese knots for me;made them myself;in the shape of (是……形狀);stand for(代表);give sb. as sth.(作為某物給予某人);further information

第三步:連詞成句

1. I wonder if you could sell some Chinese knots for me.

2. I made them myself with red still threads, cloths and other materials.

3. They look really beautiful in the shape of a diamond.

4. these knots stand for friendship, love and good luck.

5. People can either give them as gifts to friends or hang them in their houses.

(根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞(組)進(jìn)行遣詞造句,注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問題。)

第四步:連句成篇(銜接詞)

1.表文章結(jié)構(gòu)順序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second And then, Finally, In the end, At last, Last but not least

2.表并列補(bǔ)充關(guān)系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not onlybut (also), including, also

3.表轉(zhuǎn)折對(duì)比關(guān)系:However, On the contrary, but, Although + clause(從句), In spite of + n/doing, On the one hand,On the other hand Some,while others,as for, sothat

4.表因果關(guān)系:Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

5表?yè)Q一種方式表達(dá):In other words, that is to say,

6.表進(jìn)行舉例說明:For example; For instance; such as + n/doing

7. 實(shí):In fact, frankly speaking

8.表選擇:either…or…,or

連句成文,注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過渡,書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰,

第五步:潤(rùn)色修改

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