Question

3．你的美國(guó)朋友Rose要來中國(guó)參加漢語(yǔ)演講比賽．她對(duì)比賽感到非常緊張，特意發(fā)來電子郵件，向你求助．請(qǐng)據(jù)此并結(jié)合下面的寫作提示給她回一封信．
要點(diǎn)：1．賽前如何準(zhǔn)備；
2．比賽中的注意事項(xiàng)；
3．祝她好運(yùn)．
Dear Rose，
You wrote to ask for advice on how to get rid of your nervousness right before the Chinese Speech Contest．What you should keep in mind is that most people feel nervous like you．【高分句型一】Just take it easy．Here are some suggestions which I think may be helpful．（表示理解并給予安慰）
First，you should be prepared and understand the subject of your speech completely．The more familiar you are with the subject，the less nervous you will be．【高分句型二】Besides，look at your nervousness as a positive thing，which can give you the energy to deliver your speech in an emotive way．Last but not least，as the old saying goes，the confidence is the first secret of success．So do have faith in yourself．（給出建議并說明理由）
Hope these can benefit you．May you succeed in the competition�。ū磉_(dá)祝愿）
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 這是一封安慰信．根據(jù)題目要求可知用第一人稱和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)．內(nèi)容包括：（1）表示理解并給予安慰；（2）給出建議并說明理由；（3）表達(dá)祝愿．
高分句型：
1．What you should keep in mind is that most people feel nervous like you．句子里What引導(dǎo)主語(yǔ)從句 you should keep in mind做從句的賓語(yǔ)；that引導(dǎo)表語(yǔ)從句 most people feel nervous like you
你應(yīng)該知道的是多數(shù)人都和你一樣緊張．
2．The more familiar you are with the subject，the less nervous you will be．句子里用了比較級(jí)+比較級(jí)的結(jié)構(gòu)，表示"越來越"．
你對(duì)課程越熟悉，你就越不會(huì)緊張．

解答 Dear Rose，
      You wrote to ask for advice on how to get rid of your nervousness right before the Chinese Speech Contest．What you should keep in mind is that most people feel nervous like you．【高分句型一】Just take it easy．Here are some suggestions which I think may be helpful．（表示理解并給予安慰）
     First，you should be prepared and understand the subject of your speech completely．The more familiar you are with the subject，the less nervous you will be．【高分句型二】Besides，look at your nervousness as a positive thing，which can give you the energy to deliver your speech in an emotive way．Last but not least，as the old saying goes，the confidence is the first secret of success．So do have faith in yourself．（給出建議并說明理由）
      Hope these can benefit you．May you succeed in the competition！（表達(dá)祝愿）
                                                                                                                                                                                                        Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                        Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語(yǔ)寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．