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【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文,請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤,每句中最多有兩處。錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧）,并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線,并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均限一詞;

2.只允許修改10處,多者（從第11處起）不計分。

One day, when I was about 5 or 6 years old, my parents went to a trip. Grandma seemed so happy to take care of me which she made me a special breakfast. Therefore, I complained about the food she cooked, Grandma quiet put down the bowl and went into the living room. I followed and saw tear in her eyes. It was the first time that I have ever seen my strong grandmother to cry. And I knew I was the one who had caused it. I apologized and asked her to forgive me. She smiled and told me I was good boy even if I didn't feel like one then. That memory will stay in her heart forever, because I learn that ask for forgiveness helps me to learn and grow.

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【解析】1.固定搭配：go for a trip/go on a trip去旅行，故把to---for/on。

2.固定搭配：so---that---，如此---以致于---（結果狀語從句），故把which---that。

3.句意：奶奶很開心照顧我，以致于為我做特殊的早飯。但是我抱怨奶奶為我做的飯。前后表示轉折，故把Therefore---However。

4.副詞修飾動詞，故把quiet---quietly。

5.句意：我跟著并看到她的眼中有淚水。故把tear---tears。

6.固定句式：It was the first time that 主語+過去完成時態(tài)+---。故把have---had。

7.固定搭配：see sb. do sth.看見某人做某事了，故把句中seen my strong grandmother to cry.的to去掉。

8.句意：她微笑著告訴我我是一個好孩子。根據(jù)句意可知在boy前加a。

9.句意：那種記憶將留在我的心中。故把her---my。

10.句意：請求原諒幫助我學習和成長。此處是動名詞做主語，故把ask---asking。