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假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處錯(cuò)誤。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(∧)，并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線( \ )劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2.只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。

I was working as a short-order cook at two restaurants in the same neighborhood. At an Saturday night, I was finishing the dinner shirt at a first restaurant and hurrying to work at the second place, but I was delayed. Because one table kept sent back an order of pancakes, insisting they were too colder. I replaced it several times, and still the customers were dissatisfied.

As soon as I was able to leave, I race out of the restaurant. Hardly I arrived at my second job when a server immediately handed me my first order. “Make sure of that these pancakes are hot,” she said, “because the customers just left a restaurant down the street where kept serving them cold ones.”

【答案】

【1】At改為On

【2】a改為the

【3】send改為sending

【4】colder改為cold

【5】it改為them

【6】and改為but

【7】race改為raced

【8】Hardly后加had

【9】刪除sure后of

【10】where改為that/which

【解析】

試題分析：本文屬于記敘文，講述了作者在兩家餐廳打工，都遇見(jiàn)了同樣有趣的一家人，這家人一直要點(diǎn)很熱的薄餅。

【1】At改為On 考查介詞。在英語(yǔ)中，在具體某一天的晚上時(shí)，需要使用介詞on。

【2】a改為the 考查定冠詞。在序數(shù)詞前面通常要接定冠詞the表示特指。所以本句要在序數(shù)詞first前面使用the。

【3】send改為sending 考查固定搭配。短語(yǔ)keep doing sth不停地做某事；

【4】colder改為cold 考查形容詞。句意：因?yàn)橐粡堊雷硬煌５匕腰c(diǎn)的餅退回了，堅(jiān)持認(rèn)為這些餅太涼了。根據(jù)句意說(shuō)明本句并沒(méi)有比較級(jí)的含義，而且too后面接形容詞副詞的原級(jí)。

【5】it改為them 考查代詞。本句中代詞them指代前一句中提到的pancakes，因?yàn)閜ancakes是復(fù)數(shù)形式，所以使用them代替，it指代單數(shù)可數(shù)名詞或不可數(shù)名詞。

【6】and改為but 考查連詞。句意：我把餅換了好幾次，但是顧客們?nèi)匀徊粷M意。根據(jù)句意可知上下文之間是轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，所以使用but表示轉(zhuǎn)折。

【7】race改為raced 考查時(shí)態(tài)。根據(jù)第一段第二句At an Saturday night...可知本文敘述的是過(guò)去發(fā)生的事情，所以使用一般過(guò)去時(shí)。

【8】Hardly后加had 考查時(shí)態(tài)和倒裝。固定句式：Hardly....when....一...就....；其中hardly后面的主句要使用倒裝句形式，本句when后面使用了過(guò)去時(shí)，說(shuō)明前面的主句應(yīng)該使用過(guò)去完成時(shí)，因?yàn)橹骶浒l(fā)生的時(shí)間在從句之前。句意：我一到第二個(gè)工作的地方，服務(wù)員就給了我第一道點(diǎn)菜單。

【9】刪除sure后of 考查固定句式。動(dòng)詞短語(yǔ)make sure后面直接加that引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句，而make sure of后面要接名詞或名詞短語(yǔ)做賓語(yǔ)。本句后面使用了賓語(yǔ)從句that these....，所以前面使用make sure。

【10】where改為that/which 考查定語(yǔ)從句。本題定語(yǔ)從句的先行詞是a restaurant，關(guān)系代詞which/that指代先行詞在句中做主語(yǔ)，關(guān)系副詞where在定語(yǔ)從句中做狀語(yǔ)，不能做主語(yǔ)。

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