Question

書面表達(dá)（滿分25分）

請(qǐng)根據(jù)下圖提示，用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文。先簡(jiǎn)要描寫下圖，然后再發(fā)表你自己的看法和意見。

注意：

1．詞數(shù)：100左右

2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫

3．參考詞匯：孤獨(dú)（寂寞）get lonely

 

Answer 1

【答案】

不唯一

It is the old man’s birthday today. Now he is sitting on a sofa alone. Maybe his wife has been dead. On the right side is a big birthday cake sent by his son. And there are also some presents given by his daughter on the left. Yet the old man doesn’t feel happy. Instead, he looks very sad because he is lonely.

Our life is getting better and better than before. Some people think that old people will be satisfied as long as they have enough to eat and drink. I think they are quite wrong. Old people easily get lonely because they have no work to do. So we should spend time together with them and take care of them in every possible way.

【解析】

試題分析：圖畫作文是較難的題型之一，因此考生應(yīng)該特別認(rèn)真地對(duì)待。這類題一般要求考生仔細(xì)看圖，根據(jù)題目要求寫成自己的作文。實(shí)際上，圖畫作文也可以當(dāng)作三段式的提綱作文來(lái)寫。首先來(lái)描述圖畫并揭示其寓意(寓意一般用一句話來(lái)概括就可以)，其次分析原因，最后發(fā)表評(píng)論或提出建議，面對(duì)此類題型，考生應(yīng)首先確定主題，然后再動(dòng)筆。尤其要注意圖畫中人或物(人與物)的體貌表情特征和背景，確定人物之間，人物與背景之間的主要關(guān)系，以便正確掌握?qǐng)D畫所傳達(dá)的信息�？忌鷳�(yīng)該展開合理而豐富的聯(lián)想，用生動(dòng)恰當(dāng)?shù)难赞o抒發(fā)自己對(duì)圖畫的所思、所想、所感。注意圖畫作文中的文字說(shuō)明。文字說(shuō)明非常重要，通常十分清楚地提供一些寫作要點(diǎn)，考生在看說(shuō)明時(shí)要看清主、謂、賓，正確理解說(shuō)明的意義。

考點(diǎn)：圖畫作文。

點(diǎn)評(píng)：根據(jù)圖畫內(nèi)容的不同采用不同的段落發(fā)展方式。如圖畫式作文寫作多要求進(jìn)行描寫圖畫。對(duì)于漫畫式寫作，漫畫描寫本身并不重要，但文章的寓意卻要力求準(zhǔn)確，不要拖泥帶水。系統(tǒng)且突出地展開段落。展開段落要根據(jù)畫面內(nèi)容進(jìn)行，最好能圍繞每一段的主題句進(jìn)行�？忌�要進(jìn)行檢查與修改�？忌鷳�(yīng)重點(diǎn)檢查圖畫內(nèi)容是否準(zhǔn)確地被表達(dá)出來(lái)，題目所給提示是否完整地反映在文章之中。如果存在與畫面不相符的內(nèi)容，或未能完全涵蓋題目所給提示，考生應(yīng)對(duì)文章做出相應(yīng)修訂。

應(yīng)該注意適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)以使行文連貫，比如適當(dāng)選用表示因果、遞進(jìn)、轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系的連接詞，使文章流暢、通順，并避免因反復(fù)使用句式相同的簡(jiǎn)單句而造成的單調(diào)感。