Question

假設(shè)你是學(xué)校志愿者協(xié)會(huì)的負(fù)責(zé)人李明，準(zhǔn)備組織一次帶老年人之家的老年人到某公園賞花的活動(dòng)，現(xiàn)向公園公寫信，咨詢一些事宜。咨詢信內(nèi)容如下：

    1．自我介紹，并簡(jiǎn)要介紹你所負(fù)責(zé)的協(xié)會(huì)；

　　2．咨詢一些事宜，如是否為老年人免票，有無(wú)為老年人提供的特別服務(wù)等；

A Letter of Enquiry

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am from an association of young volunteers from X Middle School.                  

                                                                        

                                                                        

                                                                                                                                                     

                                                                        

                                                                            

Looking forward to hearing from you soon, I am grateful to your help.

                                                                Yours faithfully,

                                                                   Li Ming

Answer 1

A Letter of Enquiry

Dear Sir/Madam,

    I am from an association of young volunteers from X Middle School. Our club has always been committed to organize some activities to help those who need help badly. It enjoys a good reputation on Middle School, and I am proud of being part of it. Next week, we plan to accompany some senior citizens from a rest home to enjoy beautiful flower scenes in the park.

    I would appreciate it if you could provide me with the following information. Firstly, is your park open every day, and what are the opening hours? Secondly, are there any services or facilities for the old? Last but not least, I would be interested to know if your park offers any discount for both Middle School students and the old.

    Looking forward to hearing from you soon, I am grateful to your help.

                                                                Yours faithfully,

                                                                   Li Ming

解析:

分析該題目和中文提綱，這封書信是提綱式作文。時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主，人稱以第一人稱。寫作的主題是咨詢一些事宜，如是否為老年人免票，有無(wú)為老年人提供的特別服務(wù)。范文中各段各句之間的關(guān)聯(lián)詞使用的非常好。如：Firstly, Secondly, Last but not least,等。詞和詞組選用得當(dāng)，如：committed to，part of it.，enjoy beautiful flower scenes，services or facilities for the old等，都是文章的亮點(diǎn)。