Question

假如你是李華，Tracy即將結(jié)束你們學(xué)校作為交換生的學(xué)習(xí)生活并返回英國(guó)。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇?dú)g送詞。

1. 贊揚(yáng)她的善良友好；

2. 懷念與她相處的快樂(lè)時(shí)光；

3. 感謝她對(duì)大家英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)的幫助；

4. 希望她有機(jī)會(huì)再來(lái)中國(guó)。

注意：1. 詞數(shù)：120150；

      2. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

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Answer 1

【答案】

 

One possible version:

Dear teachers and friends, I’d like to say something before Tracy goes back to England.

On one hand, Tracy is a kind and friendly girl that I feel happy to be her friend. Because of her good character she is very popular with us during her stay here. On the other hand, she gets along well with everyone and all of us have a wonderful time with her. How can we forget the time that we spent together happily! I remember she doesn’t hesitate to help us whenever we have trouble in learning English. Therefore, we are grateful to Tracy from the bottom of our heart and we owe a lot of thanks to her.

True friendship never ends, so I hope we can keep in touch with Tracy. I also hope that Tracy can come back to China and stay with us in the near future.

That’s all. Thank you!

【解析】

試題分析：作文是一篇材料作文，是學(xué)生熟悉的書(shū)信格式的作文，比較容易下筆。寫(xiě)作時(shí)，按照要求，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范，要包含所有的要點(diǎn)；內(nèi)容要充實(shí)，使用豐富的詞匯。注意語(yǔ)法和時(shí)態(tài)的正確使用。不能逐句翻譯，注意語(yǔ)意的連貫，行文的流暢、優(yōu)美。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】范文使用了很好的連接詞，像on one hand, on the other hand等，條理清晰，銜接緊密；使用了許多短語(yǔ)和句型，像“hesitate to do sth; have trouble in doing sth; owe ... to”等。

考點(diǎn)：材料類(lèi)作文