Question

【題目】假定你是李華，本周日你爸爸計劃組織一場家庭聚會。請你寫封郵件給外教Steven,邀請他來你家一起參加。主要內容如下：

1.聚會時間和地點；

2.聚會人員介紹；

3.其他注意事項。

注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2.可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3.開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Steven,

I’m writing to invite you to join in a family party held this Sunday.

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Steven,

I’m writing to invite you to join in a family party held this Sunday. The party will begin at 5:00 pm in my home. There will be many people to show up m the party, including my parents and my sister. The man who is tall and has thick beard is my father, and my mother has long hair with a big smile on her face. The girl who takes charge of cleaning is my sister. All of them can’t wait to see you.

There are other things I want to tell you. Firstly, you should take a No. 218 bus to go to my home. Secondly, I hope you can tell me the food you like, and in that ease, I can prepare it better. I’m looking forward to your coming.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】本文屬于提綱類作文，要求假定你是李華，本周日你爸爸計劃組織一場家庭聚會。請你寫封郵件給外教Steven,邀請他來你家一起參加。注意郵件的格式和用語。考慮用一般將來時來寫。這篇文章對于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點的能力。需要注意緊扣文章主題，給出的要點都需要包括，缺一不可。寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系，一定要契合給出的開頭，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。

【亮點說明】本篇書面表達要點全面，結構緊湊，是一篇較好的范文。這篇短文使用了大量的短語，為文章增色不少，如: show up出現(xiàn)，take charge of負責。還使用了定語從句The man who is tall and has thick beard is my father, and my mother has long hair with a big smile on her face.和賓語從句Secondly, I hope you can tell me the food you like, and in that ease, I can prepare it better.等多種句式結構，增加了文章的可讀性。