Question

假設(shè)你叫李華。你的表哥王平在美國留學(xué)，今年春節(jié)沒有回國。他在給你的郵件中提到他非常想家，想了解你們過春節(jié)的情況。請根據(jù)以下提示用英語給他寫一封回信：

1．節(jié)儉過春節(jié)，做到“光盤”用餐；

2．減少燃放鞭炮，清潔空氣；

3．希望介紹國外過春節(jié)的情況。

注意：1．詞數(shù)120—150。

2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

參考詞匯：節(jié)儉的：frugal；放鞭炮：set off firecrackers。

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Yours,

Li Hua

 

Answer 1

Dear cousin,

　　I’m glad to hear from you. It’s a pity that you didn’t come back during the Spring Festival. We all miss you too..

　　It's suggested to avoid the waste of food in restaurants especially during the festivals. When we eat out we usually order proper dished and avoid any waste of food. I hope this practice will last forever and spread to every corner of the world.

Because of the heavy smog of last winter throughout the whole country, there is another change in setting off firecrackers. More and more people prefer to buy and set off less firecrackers in order to have a more clear sky.

With more and more Chinese living abroad, the Spring Festival has become a global festival. I also want to know how you celebrate the traditional festival in America. I hope everything is going on well with you.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：本書面表達(dá)是一篇提綱作文。提綱作文寫作的時候注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確有哪些要點(diǎn)。2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象。要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫。3、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)；語言表達(dá)要符合英語習(xí)慣。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】文中使用了非常好的短語和句子為文章增色不少，比如hear from，It’s a pity that，eat out， set off, prefer to，going on well；還運(yùn)用句型it作形式主語引導(dǎo)的主語從句。并注意了句子的銜接如：because of，when，and，finally等等。

考點(diǎn)：提綱類書面表達(dá)