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5．假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的以下作文．文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩赴，每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改．
增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（八），并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞．
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉．
修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞．
注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均限一詞．
      2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分．
When I was a child，I spent more than ten years learn the violin．Therefore，I couldn't understand"real music"．After I  graduated at high school，a friend of mine suggested that we started to learn the guitar because we all thought it was cool．l will never forget the day on that we went to buy guitars in the guitar store． There I saw a gu itar player playing the guitar，which I really enjoyed．He became my the first guitar teacher．It took me such a long time choose a guitar among several wonderful model．Now the guitar is the most importantly part of my life and I practice it every day．

Answer 1

分析 文章大意：本文主要講了作者學(xué)吉他的經(jīng)歷．當(dāng)我還是個(gè)孩子，我花了十幾年學(xué)小提琴．不過(guò)，我不明白什么才是"真正的音樂(lè)"．高中畢業(yè)后，一個(gè)朋友建議我們開(kāi)始學(xué)習(xí)吉他，因?yàn)槲覀兌颊J(rèn)為這很酷． 我永遠(yuǎn)都不會(huì)忘記我們?nèi)ゼ�他店買吉他那天．在那里，我看到了一個(gè)吉他手在彈吉他，我真的很喜歡．他就成了我的第一個(gè)吉他老師．我花了很長(zhǎng)時(shí)間在幾個(gè)優(yōu)秀的型號(hào)當(dāng)中挑選吉他．現(xiàn)在，吉他是我生命中最重要的部分，我每天都練習(xí)．

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1．learn---learning  考查非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞．本句中spend的搭配是：spend some time doing  something，所以用learning．
 2．Therefore--However 考查副詞．前后兩句之間的關(guān)系是轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系．
3．a(chǎn)t--from 考查介詞搭配，畢業(yè)于學(xué)校，一般用介詞from．
4．started--start 考查虛擬語(yǔ)氣． 句中有suggest，表示建議，從句中應(yīng)該用should+動(dòng)詞原形，should可以省略．
5．a(chǎn)ll--both 考查代詞． 我的朋友和我"是兩個(gè)人，不是指所有人，因此all---both．
6．that--which 考查定語(yǔ)從句．先行詞是 day，在定語(yǔ)從句中作賓語(yǔ)，介詞后用which．
7．去掉first前的the 考查冠詞．first前面有物主代詞就不需要冠詞了．
8．choose前面加to 考查不定式．句型：It takes sb some time to do sth．
9．model--models 考查名詞單復(fù)數(shù)．  前面有several 修飾的可數(shù)名詞，應(yīng)該用復(fù)數(shù)形式．
10，． importantly--important 考查形容詞．系動(dòng)詞后用形容詞．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 改錯(cuò)題要注意代詞，連詞以及詞性、人稱的轉(zhuǎn)化．
做好短文改錯(cuò)題，可以從以下三方面去考慮：1．快速閱讀短文，如抓住中心思想，從整體上對(duì)短文有個(gè)了解． 2．充分運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的基礎(chǔ)知識(shí)，從句型結(jié)構(gòu)、詞的變化、詞類選擇、詞的搭配、習(xí)慣用法出發(fā)，進(jìn)行分析判斷，盡快找出錯(cuò)誤在何處． 3．重視整體和語(yǔ)境，從上下文關(guān)系中找出表達(dá)連接關(guān)系或邏輯關(guān)系的詞或詞組，判斷是遞進(jìn)關(guān)系還是轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，是因果關(guān)系還是讓步關(guān)系．