Question

【題目】社交網(wǎng)絡(luò)高度發(fā)達(dá)的今天，越來越多的人用手機(jī)給自己拍照片并分享到互聯(lián)網(wǎng)上，請就此現(xiàn)象寫一篇150詞左右的短文，內(nèi)容包括:

“自拍”現(xiàn)象	無處不在，日益流行……
流行的原因	展示自我，吸引關(guān)注……
	促進(jìn)交流，增強(qiáng)友誼……
	軟件眾多，方便使用……
你對“自拍”的看法	……（至少兩點(diǎn)）

參考詞匯:selfie （自拍；自拍照） application （應(yīng)用軟件）

注意:

1. 詞數(shù)150左右。開頭已經(jīng)寫好, 不計入總詞數(shù)。

2. 作文中不得提及考生所在學(xué)校和本人姓名。

“Selfie” has become a well-known term across the globe.

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Answer 1

【答案】Today it is not difficult to find social networking pages full of photos people have taken of themselves.

With the rapid development of the Internet, an increasing number of people tend to take selfies and share them on social media, hoping to attract friends’ attention and feedback. Meanwhile, the new interactive communication also helps build a more dynamic friendship. Moreover, the widely used applications which can easily beautify images contribute to more people sharing their selfies online.

Personally, selfie is a popular way of showing themselves, through which some teenagers may gain more confidence and have a chance to make friends. However, when obsessed too much with self images, teenagers may form a wrong viewpoint that recognition and comments from others are more important than life experiences. Therefore, only when we hold the right opinion that selfie is a way of entertainment rather than a part of daily life can we actually take its advantage.

【解析】

本篇書面表達(dá)是關(guān)于“自拍”現(xiàn)象的議論文。

第1步：根據(jù)提示可知，本篇為一篇議論文；社交網(wǎng)絡(luò)高度發(fā)達(dá)的今天，越來越多的人用手機(jī)給自己拍照片并分享到互聯(lián)網(wǎng)上，請就此現(xiàn)象，根據(jù)表格提示要點(diǎn)寫一篇150詞左右的短文。人稱應(yīng)為第一、三人稱，時態(tài)應(yīng)為一般現(xiàn)在時。

第2步：根據(jù)寫作要求，確定關(guān)鍵詞（組），如：with the rapid development of the Internet（隨著互聯(lián)網(wǎng)的快速發(fā)展），tend to（傾向于），take selfies（自拍），attract f ones’ attention and feedback（引起人們的注意和反饋），build a more dynamic friendship（建立更有活力的友誼），personally（個人認(rèn)為）等。

第3步：根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。

第4步：連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的。