Question

18．假定你叫李華，近期你校開展了一個名為"要經濟還是要環(huán)境----我們必須做出抉擇嗎？"的辯論賽，結果如下表所示．請根據(jù)下表的內容寫一篇150詞左右的短文．開頭已經給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．

比例	大約40%的學生	大約60% 的學生
觀點	削減生產來保護環(huán)境	經濟發(fā)展對環(huán)境保護有利
原因	世界的大片區(qū)域已經受到工業(yè)污染的破壞，大量的動物都在死亡，人口越來越多．	很多工廠控制污染物的排放，投入資金修復所造成的破壞，充分利用循環(huán)材料．
發(fā)表自己的觀點并具體說明，至少兩點．

Recently a debate entitled"The economy or the environment---must we choose？"has been carried out in our school．The results are as follows．
About 40% of the students hold the opinion that                         

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
About 40% of the students hold the opinion that  we should cut back on the amount of things we produce to save the environment．
高分句型二：
As we all can see，large areas of the world are damaged by industrial waste．
句型一 opinion that  we should cut back on the amount of things we produce to save the environment 該句中that引導了一個同位語從句，that在從句中只起到引導作用，不作句子成分，同位的名詞為opinion．
句型二 As we all can see，large areas of the world are damaged by industrial waste 該句是一個由as引導的非限制性定語從句，as在句子作賓語，替代后面整個主句的內容．
此外，該書面表達中還包含有以下重要短語和高級詞匯：
as follows   如下     as a result 因此     on one hand…on the other hand  一方面，另一方面     the key to doing sth 做．．的關鍵
該書面表達中的重要句型部分的從句的使用和高級短語和詞匯的使用，使得文章更層次分明，表述更加確切完整．

解答 Recently a debate entitled"The economy or the environment---must we choose？"has been carried out in our school．The results are as follows．（提出論點）
   About 40% of the students hold the opinion that  we should cut back on the amount of things we produce to save the environment．（高分句型一）As we all can see，large areas of the world are damaged by industrial waste．（高分句型二）As a result，many creatures are being wiped out．What's worse，there are more and more people living on the earth，making the problem more complicated． However，60% of the people think differently，saying that the development of economy is beneficial for environmental protection．On one hand，many factories control the amount of pollution they produce．At the same time，they invest money to repair the damage they've caused．On the other hand，they make the best of recycled materials to reduce pollution．（闡述理由）
   As for me，I do believe a stable economy and a healthy environment can be possible at the same time．Recycling is the key to helping both sides．More effective laws should be put in place so that those illegal businessmen cannot go unpunished．Let's work hand in hand to make this happen soon．（個人觀點）

點評 該書面表達為圖表類，通常都有一定的數(shù)據(jù)或者表格內容作為寫作參考和依據(jù)．考生應細致觀察圖表內容，用準確的、簡單明了的語言將圖表內容表達清楚．另外，平時應注意積累相應短語和詞匯，以使得行文有更多的亮點．