Question

【題目】假如你是李明，是光明中學一名高二學生。你發(fā)現(xiàn)部分同學每次遇到重要考試，都會出現(xiàn)一些焦慮癥狀。請你用英語寫一封信，向某學生英文報編輯反映該問題。信的內(nèi)容應包括下列要點：

焦慮癥狀	建議
頭暈、乏力、睡眠不好、食欲不振等	1. 考前制訂合適的復習計劃。 2. 考試期間正常作息。 3. 睡前洗熱水澡、 喝熱牛奶等有助于睡眠。
	其他建議（內(nèi)容由考生自己擬定）

注意：1．根據(jù)以上內(nèi)容寫一篇短文，不要逐句翻譯，可適當增加細節(jié)以使行文連貫。

2．詞數(shù)：100左右。開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

3．參考詞匯：頭暈dizzy．

Dear editor，

I am Li Ming，a Senior Three student in Guangming Middle School．I am writing to tell you

about some symptoms of anxiety among us students before exams．

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear editor，

I am Li Ming, a Senior three student in Guangming Middle School. I am writing to tell you about some symptoms of anxiety among us students before exams．

Most of us feel nervous whenever we are taking an important exam. Some will feel dizzy or tired, some will suffer from lack of sleep, and some will lose their appetite. (In fact, all these symptoms have terrible effects on our exams and) we are all eager to get rid of them．

First of all，we should study hard every day and make careful plans for every exam. In this way we can avoid suffering from the pressure of exams. Second, enough sleep can make us energetic and enable us to perform well in an exam. Therefore，during the period of exams， we should not stay up too late. We can also try a warm bath or a cup of warm milk before going to bed. They might help us to have a sound sleep.(In my opinion, it is important for us to have a right attitude towards ecams. They are only a means of checking how we are getting along with our studies, so there is no need to worry too much about the results.)Besides,we’d better go out for a walk or take some outdoor exercise before and after exm so that we can keep ourselves relaxed(and then concentrate ourselves on exams.)括號中的內(nèi)容為非必要內(nèi)容，不必每條建議后都附加理由。

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

【解析】

試題分析：本篇書面表達屬于提建議類寫作，講述的是為那個考前焦慮的李明提一些能夠幫助他的建議的一封信，根據(jù)提示信息和題目要求來展開。

寫作時注意以下幾點：

1、仔細閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確有哪些要點。（如：本題中提供給我們了一些癥狀及建議，明確了寫作的要點，可以由此展開書寫，同時再增加一些自己的看法與解釋。）

2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進行分析、構(gòu)思和想象。要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫。（如：本文先列出原因，然后給出解釋，在分類提出建議，最后總結(jié)觀點，結(jié)構(gòu)調(diào)理清晰，同時整齊，增加了文章的審美觀。）

3、根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)。寫作書信時一定要注意文章結(jié)構(gòu)和層次，提出建議時要具有說服力，對于一些常用的動詞，要注意其其他形式以更為簡練的表達自己的觀點，要靈活運用各種短語和從句來豐富文章的內(nèi)容。