Question

17．假如你是高三學生李華，本周是你們學校的文化藝術(shù)節(jié)（ Cultural and Art Festival）．周三你們有幸邀請了四川大學外籍教師Hudson教授給你們上了一節(jié)英語課．請你用英語為校報寫一篇字數(shù)120左右的報道．
要求：
（1）簡述Hudson教授的上課情況；
（2）學生的表現(xiàn)（參與）與評價；
（3）對學英語的啟示．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提綱作文．根據(jù)所提供的材料信息，寫一篇報道，介紹有關(guān)在學校的文化藝術(shù)節(jié)（ Cultural and Art Festival）有幸邀請四川大學外籍教師Hudson教授上一節(jié)英語課的相關(guān)情況．
寫作時人稱以第一人稱和第三人稱為主，時態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時為主．
寫作要點：1．簡述Hudson教授的上課情況； 2．學生的表現(xiàn)（參與）與評價；3．對學英語的啟示．
重要短語：have the honor of doing （有做某事的榮幸），give a lesson to sb（給某人上課），be impressed by （對…印象深刻），begin sth with …（由…開始），attract the attention of（吸引…的注意力），follow sb（理解某人），take an active part in （從事），sing high praise for（高度贊揚…），experience sth（經(jīng)歷某事），come to a conclusion（得出結(jié)論）．
【高分句型】
1．The professor began the class with an amusing English story，which attracted the attention of all the students at once．
此處是由關(guān)系代詞"which"引導的非限制性定語從句，"The professor began the class with an amusing English story"為主句，"which"在從句中作主語，指代前面整個主句的內(nèi)容．
2．Greatly inspired，most of the students took an active part in his class．
此處是過去分詞短語作原因狀語，主句是"most of the students took an active part in his class"，主句的主語是"most of the students"，與所給動詞"inspire"構(gòu)成邏輯上的被動關(guān)系．
3．From his lesson，students came to a conclusion that it is not difficult to learn English if they various ways．
此處是由"that"構(gòu)成的同位語從句，"that it is not difficult to learn English if they various ways"這個句子解釋說明"conclusion"的內(nèi)容．

解答 On Wednesday of this Cultural and Art week，we had the honor of inviting Professor Hudson，a foreign teacher from Sichuan University，to give an English lesson to the students of Grade3．All the students were deeply impressed by this unforgettable English lesson． （簡述Hudson教授的上課情況）
The professor began the class with an amusing English story，which attracted the attention of all the students at once．【高分句型】He spoke slowly and clearly so that students could follow him well．Greatly inspired，most of the students took an active part in his class．【高分句型】After class，many students interviewed sang high praise for his teaching．They said never before had experienced so interesting a class．（學生的表現(xiàn)（參與）與評價）
From his lesson，students came to a conclusion that it is not difficult to learn English if they various ways．【高分句型】（對學英語的啟示）

點評 提綱作文在寫作時要注意內(nèi)容是否包含了所有要點．寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次，平時需注意積累短語和重要句型．