【題目】Directions：Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.

近期的一項網(wǎng)絡(luò)調(diào)查發(fā)現(xiàn)，近七成受訪者表示他們不愿對父母開放微信朋友圈；“屏蔽父母”的主要理由是，認為父母“過度關(guān)心、管教太多、無法溝通”。談?wù)勀銓?/span>“屏蔽父母”這種做法的看法。你是否對父母開放你的朋友圈呢？請說明理由

屏蔽父母：don’t share my moments with my parents

微信朋友圈：WeChat Moments

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【答案】Nowadays, it seems that Moments section of WeChat has become a popular part of social network platform. But do you think parents should be allowed to see their children’s Moments?

According to the newly-conducted survey, about 70% of the participants don’t share the moments with their parents. First and foremost, they think their parents pay too much attention to their privacy, and set a lot of rules for them to obey. Moreover, the generation gap is always a big problem, which will cause a lot of misunderstandings to arise if parents are enabled to see the posts.

Anyway, I think otherwise. In my opinion, I believe sharing my moments with my parents will promote understanding and strengthen mutual communication. Besides, adolescents are easily misled by the complicated society. If they give their parents a place in the online world, they can be protected.

【解析】

本篇書面表達屬于議論文，要求考生針對熱點話題“是否對父母屏蔽朋友圈”發(fā)表評論。

第一步：審題

體裁：議論文

時態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時態(tài)應為一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時。

結(jié)構(gòu)：總分法

總分法指把主題句作為總說，把支持句作為分說，并以這種方式安排所寫內(nèi)容。

要求：1.提出論題：是否應該對父母開放朋友圈（share my moments with my parents）

2.分論點一：反對觀點及其支持句（don’t share the moments with their parents；privacy；generation gap）

3.分論點二：個人觀點及其支持句 (share the moments with my parents; strengthen mutual communication; be protected)

第二步:列提綱 （重點詞組）

social network platform; pay attention to; set rules; the generation gap; promote understanding; strengthen mutual communication

第三步：連詞成句

1. Nowadays, it seems that Moments section of WeChat has become a popular part of social network platform.

2. First and foremost, they think their parents pay too much attention to their privacy, and set a lot of rules for them to obey.

3. The generation gap is always a big problem.

4. I believe sharing my moments with my parents will promote understanding and strengthen mutual communication.

根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。

第四步：連句成篇（銜接詞）

1.表文章結(jié)構(gòu)順序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列補充關(guān)系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,

3.表轉(zhuǎn)折對比關(guān)系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(從句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…

4.表因果關(guān)系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

連句成文，注意使用恰當?shù)倪B詞進行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，

第五步：潤色修改

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