請(qǐng)結(jié)合材料,按要求用英文寫(xiě)作。

“When I can’t answer the questions in the exam, I sometimes cheat to get high scores.”

要求:(1)就此材料發(fā)表你的看法;

(2)緊扣材料,有明確的觀點(diǎn);

(3)詞數(shù)不少于60;

(4)在答題卡上作答。

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Nowadays, it is not unusual to see some students cheat in the exam to get better grades, which has aroused great concern in society.

The reason why students cheat in the exam is that they want to harvest success without hard work. In my opinion, it is shameful to cheat in the exam because it not only goes against honesty but also breaks the rules of schools. Students should be honest and try to get good results by studying hard instead of cheating in examinations. What's more, they should find ways to make study interesting and efficient.

Only when students realize the importance of study can they improve their study methods and achieve success finally.

【解析】

試題分析:題目要求結(jié)合所給材料寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文,材料的意思是:當(dāng)我考試遇到不會(huì)做的題目時(shí),我有時(shí)會(huì)通過(guò)作弊來(lái)獲得高分。寫(xiě)作要求包括:發(fā)表自己的看法;緊扣材料并有明確的觀點(diǎn)。詞數(shù)不少于60詞;不要出現(xiàn)標(biāo)點(diǎn)和拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤,盡量保持卷面整潔、字體美觀;注意行文的連貫性。

亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明:范文涵蓋了所有的寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn),進(jìn)行了適當(dāng)?shù)耐卣梗⒆⒁庹Z(yǔ)句的連貫性;范文還使用了非限制性定語(yǔ)從句、定語(yǔ)從句、表語(yǔ)從句、倒裝等語(yǔ)法知識(shí),具備較強(qiáng)的語(yǔ)言運(yùn)用能力。

語(yǔ)法方面:非限制性定語(yǔ)從句which has aroused great concern in society;定語(yǔ)從句why students cheat in the exam;表語(yǔ)從句that they want to harvest success without hard work;原因狀語(yǔ)從句because it not only goes against honesty but also breaks the rules of schools;倒裝句Only when students realize the importance of study can they improve their study methods and achieve success finally.等,顯示了較強(qiáng)的語(yǔ)法功底,也使作文句式變得多樣;

篇章結(jié)構(gòu)方面:范文注意使用nowadays, in my opinion, and, what's more等來(lái)銜接句子和段落,使表達(dá)變得更有條理;

短語(yǔ)和搭配方面:范文使用了not only...but also, want to, go against, try to, instead of等短語(yǔ)和搭配,使作文的內(nèi)容變得充實(shí)。

考點(diǎn):材料類作文

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