Question

8．假定你是李華，你校外教Smith任教期滿即將回國，你們班同學(xué)將于明晚7點(diǎn)至9點(diǎn)在校禮堂為其舉辦一場特別的聚會(huì)．請你代表全班同學(xué)給Smith老師發(fā)一封電子郵件，邀請他參加．
注意：1．字?jǐn)?shù)80左右（開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；
2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
Dear Smith，
We are all sorry to hear that you will leave our school．                                ．
We are looking forward to seeing you．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于開放類作文，根據(jù)提示信息你校外教Smith任教期滿即將回國，你們班同學(xué)將于明晚7點(diǎn)至9點(diǎn)在校禮堂為其舉辦一場特別的聚會(huì)．請你代表全班同學(xué)給Smith老師發(fā)一封電子郵件，邀請他參加，寫作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，2、圖表是文章的總體框架，要在圖表的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．．3、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：On behalf of代表；enable sb to do sth使某人能夠做某事；make a great difference to 對…有很大影響；Besides另外；look forward to 盼望；
On behalf of my classmates，I appreciate all you have done to improve our English and to enable us to learn more about the outside world．（高分句型一）
To show our great love for you，we're planning a special gathering，and I sincerely hope that you won't miss it．（高分句型二）

解答 Dear Smith，
      We are sorry to hear that you will leave our school．On behalf of my classmates，I appreciate all you have done to improve our English and to enable us to learn more about the outside world．（高分句型一）You have really made a great difference to our lives．
      To show our great love for you，we're planning a special gathering，and I sincerely hope that you won't miss it．（高分句型二）It'll be held from seven to nine tomorrow evening at the school hall．Besides，we have prepared some interesting programs for the party．I am ready to help you with your luggage and take you to the airport．So don't hesitate to tell me in advance if you need．
      We are looking forward to seeing you．
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                 Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                  Li Hua

點(diǎn)評 英語寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．