Question

13．假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文．文中共有10處錯誤，每句中最多有兩處．錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改．增加：在缺詞處加一個漏詞符號（^），并在其下面寫出該加的詞．刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉． 修改：在錯的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞．注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞； 2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分．
A discussion about hiking had been held in our class．Some students think that hiking during vacations can make people feel healthier，fresher or more harmonious with the nature．They find themselves deep attracted by the beauty of nature．They can also be relaxing by walking in deep mountains．But nowadays some hikers even begin to explore the places people have ever been to，and accidents have happened now and then because a poor knowledge of hiking．Some hikers even lost their life．The other students in our class think it not safe to organize so dangerous activities．They make suggestions what laws should be passed and hikers should be trained before they attend the activities．

Answer 1

分析 本文是對遠足活動的討論．
有些同學(xué)認為遠足可以讓人們更健康，呼吸到更新鮮的空氣，和大自然更和諧．但是有些人去一些人類還沒有去過的地方，結(jié)果出現(xiàn)了危險，甚至丟了性命．所以許多人認為相關(guān)法律應(yīng)該被通過，遠足的人在參加活動之前要被培訓(xùn)．

解答 A discussion about hiking hadbeen held in our class．Some students think that hiking during vacations can make people feel healthier，fresher or more harmonious withthe nature．They find themselves deep attracted by the beauty of nature．They can also be relaxing by walking in deep mountains．But nowadays some hikers even begin to explore the places people have ever been to，and accidents have happened now and then because∧a poor knowledge of hiking．Some hikers even lost their life．The other students in our class think it not safe to organizesodangerous activities．They make suggestions what laws should be passed and hikers should be trained before they attend the activities．
1．had改為has．考查謂語動詞的時態(tài)．下文講述的是討論的結(jié)果，表示過去的動作對現(xiàn)在造成的影響，所以應(yīng)該用現(xiàn)在完成時態(tài)表示這個討論，因此had改為has．     
2．or改為and．考查連詞．healthier，fresher 和 more harmonious with the nature都是遠足的好處，是并列關(guān)系，所以or改為and．     
3．刪除nature前面的the．考查冠詞．nature指大自然，不用冠詞．
4．deep改為deeply．考查副詞的句法功能．修飾動詞attracted用副詞deeply．
5．relaxing改為relaxed．考查單詞辨析．做表語，修飾主語They，表示"放松的"，應(yīng)該用relaxed．    
6．ever改為never．考查單詞變形．ever表示"曾經(jīng)"；never 表示"從來沒有"．本句表示"人們從來沒有到過的地方"，所以用never．     
7．because后接of．考查介詞．because后接句子； because of 后接單詞或短語，a poor knowledge of hiking是短語，所以用 because of．    
8．life改為lives．考查名詞復(fù)數(shù)．和 their呼應(yīng)用 life的復(fù)數(shù)lives，表示"他們的生命"．     
9．so改為such．考查單詞辨析．修飾名詞短語dangerous activities用such．     
10．what改為 that．考查名詞性從句的引導(dǎo)詞．laws should be passed and hikers should be trained before they attend the activities．表示"相關(guān)法律應(yīng)該被通過，遠足的人在參加活動之前要被培訓(xùn)"，這是 suggestions 的釋義，而且句義和結(jié)構(gòu)都是完整的，所以用 that引導(dǎo)這個同位語從句．

點評 考查短文改錯．
that引導(dǎo)的名詞性從句．that 在名詞性從句中，起連詞的作用，在從句中不起語法功能，即不作任何成分，也不含有任何意義，引導(dǎo)名詞性從句時，不可省略，故稱："三不"．