Question

一家英語報(bào)社向中學(xué)生征文，主題是“十年后的我”、請根據(jù)下列要求和你的想象完成短文、家庭工作業(yè)余生活.

注意：1、字?jǐn)?shù)100左右； 2、可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫； 3. 開頭語已為你寫好

I often imagine what my life will be like in the future.

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Answer 1

I often imagine what my life will be like in the future. I think my life will be very different in ten years. I will be twenty-eight years old by then. I will have my own family. Probably with a lovely child. I hope I will work in a computer company as a program designer. I will enjoy my work and get along well with my colleagues, I will do a good job in whatever I do. In my free time, I will continue to take regular exercise, such as swimming, running and various ball games. On my holidays, I will travel around the world. In a word, my life will be much richer and more colorful.

【解析】

試題分析：本篇書面表達(dá)屬于說明文，根據(jù)提示信息和要求來寫作。寫作時注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確有哪些要點(diǎn)。2、要在給出的信息范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象。要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫。本文寫作時可以按照時間順序進(jìn)行介紹。3、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般將來時。 4.注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種句式和結(jié)構(gòu)。比如I often imagine what my life will be like in the future.是賓語從句。I will do a good job in whatever I do.是讓步狀語從句。此外，文章還多次使用I will…作為句子的開頭，形成排比，使文章更有氣勢和條理。大量短語的使用，如：be like ，in the future，by then，get along well with，do a good job，In one’s free time，such as，In a word等使文章內(nèi)容更具有層次感，也使語言更加連貫。

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