【題目】書(shū)面表達(dá)

你校正在進(jìn)行“英語(yǔ)讀書(shū)周”活動(dòng)。該活動(dòng)要求學(xué)生摘錄名言佳句(quote)并相互交流。以下是某同學(xué)摘錄的句子：“Your future depends on many things, but mostly on you”。請(qǐng)按下列要求用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇100－120個(gè)詞的短文：

1. 針對(duì)摘錄句中的觀點(diǎn)談?wù)勀愕目捶ǎ?/span>

2. 舉例說(shuō)明理由。注意：短文的開(kāi)頭已給出(不計(jì)詞數(shù))。

In the English Reading Week, one of my classmates recommended a quote to us, which goes like this：“Your future depends on many things, but mostly on you.”

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【答案】

In the English Reading Week, one of my classmates recommended a quote to us, which goes like this：“Your future depends on many things, but mostly on you.” I can't agree more with this view. It's true that our future is determined by many things, such as opportunities and help from others, but our own attitude, determination, and hard work play a more important role. In other words, we are the master of our own future.

Take Abraham Lincoln for example. He was born in a poor family, and only received a limited education in his childhood. Yet through his painstaking efforts, he changed not only his own fate but also the history of America. Even to this day, Lincoln is regarded as one of the most inspiring figures in the world. Therefore, I firmly believe that our future is in our own hands.

【解析】

試題分析：本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于觀點(diǎn)類(lèi)議論文——開(kāi)放式。試題材料新穎，貼近考生實(shí)際生活，屬于半開(kāi)放性話題。對(duì)既定的話題進(jìn)行討論，考生有一定的自由發(fā)揮空間，暢所欲言，各抒己見(jiàn)。論點(diǎn)明確，論據(jù)充分是得分的關(guān)鍵。如能靈活運(yùn)用學(xué)過(guò)而且熟練的亮點(diǎn)詞匯、短語(yǔ)和句型，盡量變換句式，長(zhǎng)短句交錯(cuò)使用，并且恰當(dāng)?shù)卮┎逡恍┻^(guò)渡性詞語(yǔ)，使文章自然、流暢，有較強(qiáng)的邏輯性，文章一定會(huì)脫穎而出。在寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意把握好以下幾點(diǎn)：(1)書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范，卷面整潔。(2)行文緊湊，過(guò)渡自然。(3)要點(diǎn)完整，表達(dá)清楚。(4)語(yǔ)法正確，時(shí)態(tài)準(zhǔn)確。(5)用詞無(wú)誤，控制得當(dāng)(100-120詞之間)。(6)認(rèn)真復(fù)查，胸有成竹。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】

本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種句式和結(jié)構(gòu)。比如It's true that our future is determined by many things, such as opportunities and help from others, but our own attitude, determination, and hard work play a more important role.使用了主語(yǔ)從句和并列句。此外，文章還使用了大量短語(yǔ)In other words，not only … but also。Yet，therefore等詞的使用使文章內(nèi)容更具有層次感，也使語(yǔ)言更加連貫。

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