Question

目前，許多學(xué)校對學(xué)生采取封閉式管理，學(xué)生對此看法不一。請根據(jù)下表所提供的信息，寫一篇短文，談?wù)勛约旱目捶ā?/p>

注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；

    　2．短文開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Nowadays a lot of schools keep their students in school all day long．　　　　

　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　

　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　

　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

Nowadays a lot of schools keep their students in school all day long．Students have different opinions about it．

    Some students think they enjoy less freedom and have little chance to get exposed to society．They are not able to fully develop their interests and hobbies． Therefore, they have less interest in their studies．Others think schools are the best place to get knowledge, a place where they can learn whole-heartedly without any disturbances．Some students，not mature enough，lack the  ability to  control themselves．Once out of school，they may lose control of themselves and do something bad that will affect their studies．

Personally．it is necessary to keep students at school．At the same time schools should also organize various activities for students to enjoy their school life。

【解析】本文是一個正反觀點(diǎn)類的文章，要點(diǎn)都已經(jīng)清晰的給出了，學(xué)生只需要翻譯成英語即可。在寫作的過程中要注意使用高級詞匯，好的連接詞，好的句型讓文章更流暢。