Question

1．下面的圖表顯示了某校高三學生周末放假的學習生活情況．
Ways to spend the weekend 
 
根據(jù)上圖信息，請以"Ways to spend the weekend"為題，用英語寫一篇100-120個詞的短文． 要求如下：
1．簡要描述圖中的信息；
2．說明原因 （為了高效學習；鍛煉身體；爭分奪秒…）；
3．談?wù)勀愕目捶ǎ?br />注意：文章標題和開頭已給出（不計詞數(shù)）
Ways to spend the weekend
 
     As can be seen from the chart，                                                   
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Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
句型一：
Going back home and having a good rest is what most students would like to do（1），while（2）25% students choose to study at school during weekends．大多數(shù)學生回家休息，而25%的學生選擇周末在學校學習．
（1）該部分是be動詞后what 引導的表語從句，書面表達中選擇從句是常見的高分句型．
（2）while表示"可是，然而"，用來表示前后之間的對比和轉(zhuǎn)折．
句型二：
The fewest students，accounting for 15%，take outdoor activities to spend their weekends．最少數(shù)量的學生（約占15%）周末參與戶外運動；
account for 占據(jù)比例；本句中是現(xiàn)在分詞短語做后置定語，書面表達中運用分詞做定語或狀語總是吸引眼球的高分句式．
句型三：
Only by（1）combining a good  rest with（2）proper exercise can senior three students expect a successful academic life．只有把休息和鍛煉結(jié)合起來高三學生才能期待成功的學校生活．
（1）"only+狀語"放在句首，句子用部分倒裝的語序，增強了語言的氣勢，情感色彩強烈．
（2）combine…with把…與…結(jié)合．

解答 Ways to Spend the Weekend
  As can be seen from the chart，senior three students have different ways to spend their weekends．Going back home and having a good rest is what most students would like to do，while 25% students choose to study at school during weekends【句型一】．The fewest students，accounting for 15%，take outdoor activities to spend their weekends【句型二】（描述圖表信息）．
  Various reasons are responsible for their different choices．Those who choose to go back home believe that a good rest does help them relax and work more efficiently during the school time．Outdoor-activity lovers hold the opinion that taking exercise is a wonderful way to refresh themselves．However，a small number of students living far away from home tend to stay at school to save every minute to study（分析不同原因）．
  Personally，despite the heavy study pressure，senior three year doesn't necessarily mean studying all the time．Only by combining a good  rest and proper exercise can senior three students expect a successful academic life【句型三】（個人看法和建議）．

點評 寫作時首先審題要到位：審體裁、人稱和時態(tài)；審要點，根據(jù)題目的要求審要點，要點要包括文字中的要點，也要包括圖片或表格中的主要信息．其次要考慮詞語和句型的選用，詞語和句型的選用要包含作者的感情色彩和增強表達的氣勢；再次，運用關(guān)聯(lián)詞如besides、what's  more、moreover、for one thing …for another等，使文字更加流暢．