Question

讀寫任務(wù)（共1小題，滿分25分）

“Everyone will have a new start, so do not let your past defeat your present and future. In the university, I know what I shall do. Now I have applied for a student loan, and I will work a part-time job, which I think, can cover the expense myself. I won’t add any pressure to my family.” Jia Zuosheng, 27, a security guard at the library of Beijing-based Tsinghua University before he was admitted to Shandong University, told the reporter about himself calmly.

“I am lucky. I cherished the job very much because it provided me with a good chance to read books. I took night shifts so I had plenty of time to study in the daytime. When I had problems I couldn`t work out, I plucked up my courage to consult teachers or students at Tsinghua, who were all friendly to me, and helped me a lot. ”

“My dream is to be a college teacher, to educate students with my knowledge and love and help them enjoy true, kind and beautiful things. That’s also the reason why I took the national entrance examination again. Although, however, I’m old enough to get married, I hope my parents would understand what I want to do.”

【寫作內(nèi)容】

1. 以約30個詞概括文章的內(nèi)容。

2. 以約120個詞就“心中有夢想”發(fā)表你的看法，包括如下要點：

(1) 你贊成主人公邊打工邊學(xué)習(xí)嗎？

(2) 你心中的夢想是什么？

(3) 如何實現(xiàn)自己的夢想？

【寫作要求】

1. 在作文中可以使用親身的經(jīng)歷或虛構(gòu)的故事，也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。

2. 作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學(xué)校名稱。

【評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)】

概括準(zhǔn)確，語言規(guī)范，內(nèi)容合適，篇章連貫。

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Possible version:

Jia Zuosheng, 27, was admitted to Shandong University with his dream to be a teacher after working as a security guard at the library of Tsinghua University, where he valued his job and got much help from teachers and students as well.

Jia has set up a good example for us! As a security guard, he has kept his own dream in mind, and never given it up until he managed to achieve it with his attempt. I really understand what “The time does not lose the person with high aspirations” means from his experience.

No doubt that it is not so easy to achieve a dream without much preparation. If you want to realize your dream, you should set up a realistic goal, review it once several weeks or one or two months, and you can adjust it to your aim. Then keep it on, or you will lose your direction to the goal. In addition, you must be devoted yourself to it forever.

If you don’t have a dream, your life will be dull and dark. In my mind, my dream is to be a college student and to do my best to build up a society with equality and justice.

【解析】

試題分析：考查半開放性短文寫作。在第一部分描述Jia Zuosheng被山東大學(xué)錄取，邊學(xué)習(xí)邊打工，為了自己的夢想而努力。我們對此種行為應(yīng)該持支持的態(tài)度和立場。在建設(shè)個人的夢想的時候，考生從自己的實際出發(fā)，描述自己實際的理想。在任何實現(xiàn)自己的理想方面，可以從努力學(xué)習(xí)，全力以赴，巧學(xué)活學(xué)等方面展開說明。要求考生在保證內(nèi)容要點全部概括的基礎(chǔ)上可以充分發(fā)揮自己的想象，進(jìn)而用自己的語言來表達(dá)某種觀點或看法，增添了寫作的靈活性，同時能較好地考查考生的想象能力和英語語言表達(dá)能力。

考點：考查半開放性短文寫作。

點評：開放性作文只給出了一個話題，給考生自由發(fā)揮的余地很大。對于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點的能力。在完成開放性作文時，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時要賦予變化，因為這樣你才可以更好的駕馭。同時也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個要點組織成一個完整的整體，如besides, further, last but not least等。在發(fā)表個人觀點的時候，可以使用諺語來提升整個文章的檔次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。