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16．假設你是紅星中學的學生李華，請按照以下四幅圖的先后順序，用英文寫一篇周記，記述上周六你和父母一起參加奧林匹克森林公園健步走活動的過程．
注意：1．詞數(shù)不少于60；
2．周記的開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．     
Last Saturday，I went to the Olympic Forest Park with my parents to take part in an activity called"I Walk，and I'm Fit．"

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
Then，we gathered at the starting point，stretching arms and legs to prepare ourselves for the coming long distance walking．于是，我們在起點集合，舒展手臂和腿為即將到來的長距離徒步走作準備，
高分句型二：
Soon，a signal was given and off we went along the walking route，which ran around the park．
很快，信號發(fā)出，我們就沿著行走路線開始徒步，那條路是沿著公園的．
句型一 stretching arms and legs to prepare ourselves for the coming..該部分是現(xiàn)在分詞短語在此處作伴隨狀語，表明該動作與主語謂語動作同時或幾乎同時發(fā)生，且表主動
句型二 which ran around the park 該句是which作關系代詞引導的非限制性定語從句，which在從句中充當主語，替代前面的先行詞walking route

解答 Last Saturday，I went to the Olympic Forest Park with my parents to take in an activity called"I walk，and I'm Fit"．
   Arriving early in the morning，we were surprised to find many participants of different ages already waiting excitedly at the registration place．We joined them．Then，we gathered at the starting point，stretching arms and legs to prepare ourselves for the coming long distance walking．（高分句型一）Soon，a signal was given and off we went along the walking route，which ran around the park．（高分句型二）Some people walked briskly，while others just took their time to enjoy the fresh air and the beautiful natural scenery．（介紹運動）
   After more than one hour's walking，we finally reached the finish line．The 5 km journey was challenging but really enjoyable．My parents and I cheered each other for our success．Regular activities like this not only keep us fit，but also help get us closer to each other and to nature．（運動好處）

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