Question

【題目】最近，你們學校開展了以“中國夢”為主題的系列活動。你參加了其中的英語演講比賽，請你寫一篇題為 “My Chinese Dream”的演講稿。內(nèi)容要點如下：

1. 你對中國夢的暢想；

2. 你能為實現(xiàn)中國夢做出哪些努力。

注意：

1. 總詞數(shù)不少于100；

2. 開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

Good morning, everyone!

The topic of my speech today is “My Chinese Dream”.

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Thank you for listening!

Answer 1

【答案】

When someone asks me: What is your Chinese dream? I will answer it without any hesitation: to be a good doctor. The reason why I want to be a doctor is that I want to save people’s lives as possible as I can. When I was young, I had a terrible car accident. Thanks to the doctors, they brought me back to life. From then on, to be a good doctor has always been an inspiration to me. I will study hard to make sure that my dream will come true in the future.

Chinese dream is made up of every ordinary people’s dreams. We should do our best to make our dream come true.

【解析】

試題分析：最近，你們學校開展了以“中國夢”為主題的系列活動。你參加了其中的英語演講比賽，請你寫一篇題為 “My Chinese Dream”的演講稿。內(nèi)容要點如下：1. 你對中國夢的暢想；2. 你能為實現(xiàn)中國夢做出哪些努力。寫作時不要逐句翻譯，可適當增加細節(jié)以使行文連貫同時要把所提示的點寫全，語句通順，同時要注意準確運用時態(tài)、語態(tài)、上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系。根據(jù)句意適當使用并列連詞，同時也要合理運用高級詞匯和高級句子為文章增色添彩。注意：1. 總詞數(shù)不少于100；2. 開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

【亮點說明】本文是一篇演講稿，語言簡練，層次分明，結(jié)構(gòu)嚴謹，布局合理，并運用高級句子。When someone asks me:使用時間狀語從句；The reason why I want to be a doctor is that I want to save people’s lives as possible as I can. Why引導(dǎo)的定語從句和that引導(dǎo)的表語從句堪稱經(jīng)典；to be a good doctor has always been an inspiration to me.動詞不定式做主語；I will study hard to make sure that my dream will come true in the future.賓語從句用在句中；We should do our best to make our dream come true.兩個動詞不定式的使用很是巧妙；另外，as possible as I can. Thanks to the doctors, From then on,的運用為文章增色添彩。