Question

14．假如你叫李華，最近參加了一次讀書會活動．現在，請以李華的名義給你的美國朋友Bob寫一封信，介紹此次活動中你和大家分享的一位中國作家：簡單介紹該作家、你所讀的作品、以及你喜歡該作家（或者其作品）的原因．
注意：
1．詞數100左右；
2．可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3．開頭和結尾已經給出，不計入總詞數．
Dear Bob，
How are you doing？Recently I attended a reading activity，at which I shared my favorite writer Lao She and his novel Si Shi Tong Tang．
Lao She was one of the most renowned Chinese writers，famous for his novels and plays．His works are deeply rooted in the Chinese society and depict the real-life experience of various people．His representative novel Si Shi Tong Tang，translated as Four Generations under One Roof，vividly reveals the common people's pitiful experience of that age．It is a touching realism masterpiece．
I think a writer is a mighty actor，who can use a pen to write about the whole world．Lao She is such a writer whose works have influenced quite a few generations．That's why I like him and his works．
Bob，can you tell me who is your favorite writer？Looking forward to your reply．
Yours，
Li Hua
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇介紹老舍的作文．根據題目要求可知用第一人稱和一般現在時態(tài)．內容包括：一點明主題；二介紹老舍的寫作特色和主要作品；三喜歡老舍的原因；四詢問對方喜歡的作家．
高分句型：
1．Recently I attended a reading activity，at which I shared my favorite writer Lao She and his novel Si Shi Tong Tang．主句里 which 引導非限制性定語從句，代指先行詞a reading activity．
近來，我參加了一個讀書活動，在這個活動里，我分享了我最喜歡的作家老舍以及他的小說《四世同堂》．
2．His representative novel Si Shi Tong Tang，translated as Four Generations under One Roof，vividly reveals the common people's pitiful experience of that age．句子里translated as Four Generations under One Roof是過去分詞做Si Shi Tong Tang的定語； reveals 是謂語動詞；that age表示"那個年代"．
他的代表作《四世同堂》，被翻譯成Four Generations under One Roof，逼真的揭露了那個年代普通人的痛苦經歷．

解答 ossible version：
Dear Bob，
How are you doing？
Recently I attended a reading activity，at which I shared my favorite writer Lao She and his novel Si Shi Tong Tang．【高分句型一】（點明主題）
Lao She was one of the most renowned Chinese writers，famous for his novels and plays．His works are deeply rooted in the Chinese society and depict the real-life experience of various people．His representative novel Si Shi Tong Tang，translated as Four Generations under One Roof，vividly reveals the common people's pitiful experience of that age．【高分句型二】It is a touching realism masterpiece．（介紹老舍的寫作特色和主要作品）
I think a writer is a mighty actor，who can use a pen to write about the whole world．Lao She is such a writer whose works have influenced quite a few generations．That's why I like him and his works．（喜歡老舍的原因）
Bob，can you tell me who is your favorite writer？Looking forward to your reply．（詢問對方喜歡的作家）
Yours，
Li Hua

點評 考查提綱類作文．
我們在寫作文的時候，一般應該把亮點放在明顯的位置，以便于能夠吸引閱卷老師的眼球；同時對于高分句型的使用也要慎重，應該用自己有把握的句子，特別是高考時，應該以正確為首要目的．