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2．假設(shè)你是李華，以優(yōu)異的成績(jī)考入了理想的大學(xué)，但由于家境原因，難以負(fù)擔(dān)學(xué)費(fèi)．你的外籍教師Betty得知你的情況之后為你捐助了學(xué)費(fèi)，幫你完成學(xué)業(yè)．現(xiàn)請(qǐng)你給Betty老師寫一封信，以表謝意．
內(nèi)容包括：
1．Betty老師提供的捐款8000元已經(jīng)收到，全家非常感謝．
2．立志要努力學(xué)習(xí)知識(shí)，取得優(yōu)異成績(jī)．
3．大學(xué)畢業(yè)之后會(huì)建設(shè)家鄉(xiāng)，奉獻(xiàn)家鄉(xiāng)．
4．會(huì)和父母在今年暑假一起去拜訪Betty老師．
注意：
1．請(qǐng)使用規(guī)范英語(yǔ)，詞數(shù)不少于100；
2．可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié)，以使內(nèi)容充實(shí)、行文連貫；
3．開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
Dear Mrs．Betty，
Thank you very much for your kindness．Dear Mrs．Betty，
Thank you very much for your kindness．I have received your letter and 8000 yuan．My family and I are very happy and grateful．
With your help，I will have no difficulty in studying at university．（高分句型一）So I have made up my mind to study hard．I'm sure I will make great progress．I'm going back to my hometown after I graduate from university and I am determined to devote myself to building my hometown．
My parents and I are going to pay a visit to you this summer holiday．（高分句型二）Thank you again for your kind help．
Best wishes．
Yours sincerely，
Lihua
Best wishes．
Yours sincerely，
Lihua．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
With your help，I will have no difficulty in studying at university．在您的幫助之下，我將毫無壓力的完成我的大學(xué)學(xué)業(yè)．
高分句型二：
My parents and I are going to pay a visit to you this summer holiday．我和我的父母計(jì)劃將于今年暑假期間拜訪您．
句型一 ①with one's help 在某人的幫助之下 ②have no difficulty in doing sth，此處difficulty 為不可數(shù)名詞，沒有復(fù)數(shù)形式，做某事沒有困難
句型二 My parents and I are going to pay a visit to you this summer holiday．該句謂語(yǔ)部分使用了be going to do sth 將來時(shí)的一種表達(dá)方式，表明很早就計(jì)劃安排要做的事

解答 Dear Mrs．Betty，
     Thank you very much for your kindness．I have received your letter and 8000 yuan．My family and I are very happy and grateful．（說明原因）
     With your help，I will have no difficulty in studying at university．（高分句型一）So I have made up my mind to study hard．I'm sure I will make great progress．I'm going back to my hometown after I graduate from university and I am determined to devote myself to building my hometown．（表明決心）
  My parents and I are going to pay a visit to you this summer holiday．（高分句型二）Thank you again for your kind help．（再次感謝）
Best wishes．
Yours sincerely，
Lihua

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