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2．假設(shè)你是李華，你的美國(guó)筆友Tom邀請(qǐng)你寒假去美國(guó)玩，但你不能應(yīng)邀前往．請(qǐng)你圍繞以下要點(diǎn)給Tom 寫(xiě)封郵件：
1．春節(jié)是與家人團(tuán)聚的日子，不想獨(dú)自出游；
2．高考臨近，想利用這個(gè)寒假參加輔導(dǎo)班（tutorial classes），補(bǔ)習(xí)自己的弱勢(shì)學(xué)科；
3．高考結(jié)束后可以去美國(guó)游玩，希望Tom能夠做自己的導(dǎo)游．
注意：1．詞數(shù)：150-180；
      2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．

Answer 1

分析 本文為對(duì)方邀請(qǐng)自己去美國(guó)度寒假的回信，要說(shuō)明不能去的原因，解釋清楚和委婉的表達(dá)歉意以及再約時(shí)間的意愿．審題步驟：1）體裁：書(shū)信；2）話題：道歉+計(jì)劃3）要點(diǎn)：材料提供的三個(gè)要點(diǎn)4）段落劃分及要點(diǎn)分布：段一/套話+背景+目的；段二/交代前兩個(gè)要點(diǎn)（一定要展開(kāi)論述）；段三/計(jì)劃+請(qǐng)求原諒的套話．根據(jù)文章內(nèi)容可知時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱用第一人稱．
重要短語(yǔ)：
regret to do sth遺憾的做某事；As far as sb be concerned就某人個(gè)人而言；prefer to do rather than do sth與做某事相比更愿意做另外一件事； First of all 首先；What's more而且；take sth into consideration將…考慮在內(nèi)；attend some tutorial classes參加輔導(dǎo)班
高分句型：
1．it's the coming of the Spring Festival that makes me prefer to stay at home rather than take a travel to America．這是一個(gè)強(qiáng)調(diào)句型，強(qiáng)調(diào)的是句子的主語(yǔ)部分the coming of the Spring Festival．
2．So significant is it to me that I will attend some tutorial classes during this winter holiday for some of my weak divisions．本句為so+形容詞位于句首引起倒裝的結(jié)構(gòu)，that引導(dǎo)的為一個(gè)結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)從句．
3．I will appreciate it if you can be my guide at the time．本句中含有if引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句，作動(dòng)詞appreciate的賓語(yǔ)，而且appreciate后面的代詞it不能省略，it只是一個(gè)謙詞，在句中無(wú)實(shí)意．

解答 Dear Tom，
      It's a long time since we met last time and I miss you very much．Thanks for your invitation．However，I regret to tell you that I can't travel to America this winter holiday for some unavoidable reasons．（表明態(tài)度）
     First of all，it's the coming of the Spring Festival that makes me prefer to stay at home rather than take a travel to America．（高分句型）As far as we Chinese are concerned，the Spring Festival is a family time treasured by us all．What's more，the College Entrance Examination is coming．So significant is it to me that I will attend some tutorial classes during this winter holiday for some of my weak divisions．（高分句型）Taking all the above factors into consideration，I have to say sorry again．（陳述理由）
Anyway，shall I make it after the Exam？I will appreciate it if you can be my guide at the time．（高分句型）（表達(dá)愿望）
     Yours
     Li Hua

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