Question

20．假如你是李華，你的美國網友Peter參加中國象棋網絡挑戰(zhàn)賽獲得了一等獎．請根據(jù)以下提示寫一封英文電子郵件向他表示祝賀．
1）祝賀他獲獎；
2）肯定他付出的努力；
3）詢問何時方便，在網上切磋棋藝．
注意：
1）詞數(shù)100左右；
2）可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫； 3）開頭和結尾已為你寫好．
Dear Peter，
I am writing to offer my sincere congratulations …
to you on your winning the first prize in the Chinese Chess Network Challenge．As your friend，I just want you to know how glad I am at your success．（高分句型一）
"Everything comes to him who waits．"For these years，you've shown great interest in Chinese chess and kept on practicing it every day．Not only have you read many books about Chinese chess strategy，but also you have competed in all kinds of Chinese chess contest．（高分句型二）Finally，you succeeded in winning the online competition!
So I'm so happy that you become champion of this network challenge．At last，I hope to play Chinese chess with you so that we can make progress together．（高分句型三）Please tell me when you have time．
Congratulations again．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息 假如你是李華，你的美國網友Peter參加中國象棋網絡挑戰(zhàn)賽獲得了一等獎．請根據(jù)以下提示寫一封英文電子郵件向他表示祝賀．寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細閱讀有關提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個要點：1）祝賀他獲獎；2）肯定他付出的努力；3）詢問何時方便，在網上切磋棋藝．2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內進行分析、構思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序寫．3、根據(jù)要表達的內容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點．
【亮點說明】本文結構緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達：the first prize一等獎；keep on 一直做某事；Not only，but also不僅，而且；Finally最后；make progress 取得進步；succeed in doing成功做成某事；
As your friend，I just want you to know how glad I am at your success．（高分句型一）
Not only have you read many books about Chinese chess strategy，but also you have competed in all kinds of Chinese chess contest．（高分句型二）
At last，I hope to play Chinese chess with you so that we can make progress together．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Petet
       I am writing to offer my sincere congratulations to you on your winning the first prize in the Chinese Chess Network Challenge．As your friend，I just want you to know how glad I am at your success．（高分句型一）
"Everything comes to him who waits．"For these years，you've shown great interest in Chinese chess and kept on practicing it every day．Not only have you read many books about Chinese chess strategy，but also you have competed in all kinds of Chinese chess contest．（高分句型二）Finally，you succeeded in winning the online competition!
       So I'm so happy that you become champion of this network challenge．At last，I hope to play Chinese chess with you so that we can make progress together．（高分句型三）Please tell me when you have time．
       Congratulations again．
    Yours，
Li Hua

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎方面的訓練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．