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【題目】短文改錯

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

Frank joined the army after middle school. He did quite well in everything besides shooting. One day, the new soldiers were practiced shooting. Frank performed poorly while the rest was doing quite well. After he had shot at the target nine times but had not hit once, the officer shouted, “I had never seen such a fool! Don’t waste away your last bullet! Go behind that wall and shoot yourself with it!” Frank went behind a wall, and a few seconds late the sound of a shot was heard by the officer and the other soldier. “Heavens!” the officer said. “ Has that silly man real done so?” He ran behind the wall anxiously, only find Frank standing there straight, saying, “ I’m sorry, but I missed again.”

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【6】【7】【8】【9】【10】

【答案】

【1】besides 改成 except

【2】practiced改成 practicing

【3】was 改成 were

【4】Had 改成have

【5】把away 刪掉

【6】a改成the

【7】late改成later

【8】soldier改成soldiers

【9】real改成really

【10】only和find 之間加to

【解析】試題分析：本文屬于記敘文，講述了Frank中學畢業(yè)以后去當兵，在射擊訓練這一項上表現(xiàn)很糟糕。

【1】besides 改成 except 考查介詞。介詞besides除...之外（包括在內）；except除...之外（不包括在內）；句意：除了射擊，他所有方面都很好。根據(jù)下文可知他的射擊不好，也就是沒有被包括在本句的everything之內，所以使用except。

【2】practiced改成 practicing 考查語態(tài)。本句中主語the new soldiers與動詞practice構成主動關系，所以使用過去進行時的主動形式。

【3】was 改成 were 考查主謂一致。本句的主語是the rest，指代其余的soldiers，當the rest指代可數(shù)名詞復數(shù)的時候，謂語動詞使用復數(shù)形式。

【4】had 改成have 考查時態(tài)。本句是一個直接引語，軍官說：我從來沒有見過這樣一個傻瓜。在直接引語中使用現(xiàn)在完成時，表示到說話的時候已經完成的動作。

【5】把away 刪掉 考查動詞。動詞waste浪費，這是一個及物動詞，后面直接加賓語，介詞away是多余的。

【6】a改成the 考查冠詞。在英語中常常使用定冠詞the表示特指，本句中使用the修飾wall，特指前面一句中提到的that wall。

【7】late改成later 考查副詞用法。副詞later與一段時間連用，表示“一段時間以后”，句意：幾秒鐘以后，軍官聽見了一聲槍響。

【8】Soldier改成soldiers 考查名詞單復數(shù)。本句表示軍官和其余的士兵都聽到了一聲槍響，而根據(jù)第三句可知很多新兵在一起訓練，所以使用復數(shù)形式。

【9】real改成really 考查副詞。在英語中通常使用副詞做狀語修飾動詞，使用本句中使用really修飾謂語動詞has done so。形容詞real通常在句中充當定語或者表語，不能做狀語。

【10】only和find 之間加to 考查不定式用法。不定式常常和only連用，表示意料之外的結果。句意：他焦急地跑到墻后面，結果卻發(fā)現(xiàn)Frank還站在那里說：對不起，我又打偏了。

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