Question

15．假設(shè)你是晨光中學(xué)的學(xué)生會(huì)主席李華．學(xué)生會(huì)將舉辦每年一度的英語(yǔ)演講比賽，本年度的主題為"The English Novel I Like Best"．作為組織者，你將在演講比賽開(kāi)幕時(shí)發(fā)言，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇發(fā)言稿．
（1）說(shuō)明比賽的意義，如提高英語(yǔ)聽(tīng)說(shuō)能力，養(yǎng)成讀書(shū)的習(xí)慣等；
（2）說(shuō)明比賽的注意事項(xiàng)，如每人演講不超過(guò)5分鐘，語(yǔ)言流利，發(fā)音準(zhǔn)確等；
（3）預(yù)祝比賽圓滿成功．
注意：
（1）詞數(shù)：不少于100詞；
（2）可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
（3）發(fā)言稿的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入詞數(shù)．
Good afternoon，ladies and gentlemen，
        Welcome to this year's English speech competition．I'm very glad to stand here as an organizer of this competition．For the sake of improving our spoken English and forming a good habit of reading，we will organize this competition，which is held every year．And I hope that everyone who participates in the competition can benefit a lot from it．
Besides，there are some tips that participators should notice．For example，the time shouldn't be beyond five minutes．Every one should speak smoothly and pronounce correctly and so on．
At last，I sincerely hope that everyone can achieve a great success．
Thank you!

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇發(fā)言稿．根據(jù)題目要求可知用第一人稱，和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)來(lái)說(shuō)明比賽的意義和要求．內(nèi)容包括：一說(shuō)明比賽的意義；二說(shuō)明比賽的注意事項(xiàng)；三預(yù)祝比賽圓滿成功．
高分句型：
1．For the sake of improving our spoken English and forming（forming和improving并列做For the sake of 的賓語(yǔ)，F(xiàn)or the sake of 比賽"為了"） a good habit of reading，we will organize this competition，which（which引導(dǎo)定語(yǔ)從句，代指先行詞this competition） is held every year．
為了提高我們的英語(yǔ)口語(yǔ)，并且養(yǎng)成良好的閱讀習(xí)慣，我們將要舉行這次一年一度的比賽．
2．And I hope that（that引導(dǎo)賓語(yǔ)從句） everyone who （who引導(dǎo)定語(yǔ)從句，代指先行詞everyone）participates in the competition can benefit a lot from it．
我希望參加比賽的每一個(gè)人都能從比賽中有所收獲．

解答 Good afternoon，teachers and classmates，
     Welcome to this year's English speech competition． I'm very glad to stand here as an organizer of this competition．For the sake of improving our spoken English and forming a good habit of reading，we will organize this competition，which is held every year．【高分句型一】And I hope that everyone who participates in the competition can benefit a lot from it．【高分句型二】（說(shuō)明比賽的意義）
    Besides，there are some tips that participators should notice．For example，the time shouldn't be beyond five minutes．Every one should speak smoothly and pronounce correctly and so on．（說(shuō)明比賽的注意事項(xiàng)）
     At last，I sincerely hope that everyone can achieve a great success．（預(yù)祝比賽圓滿成功）
     Thank you!

點(diǎn)評(píng) 提綱作文注意：
1．仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確有哪些要點(diǎn)．
2．提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語(yǔ)，
   按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來(lái)寫(xiě)．
3．根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)；語(yǔ)言表達(dá)要符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣．