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【題目】假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高二（1）班學(xué)生李華。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序，給21世紀(jì)英文報(bào)寫一封稿件，介紹上周你班同學(xué)參觀北京市規(guī)劃展覽館（Beijing Planning Exhibition Hall）的全過(guò)程。

注意：同數(shù)不少于60；

提示如：沙盤 urban planning model 講解員 docent

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Answer 1

【答案】Last Friday, our class paid a visit to Beijing Planning Exhibition Hall, which opened our eyes to the continuous physical transformation of the ancient city.

The visit started with a warm welcome from a docent at the entrance, who briefly introduced the main thematic areas. Once inside, we were attracted to an exhibition that gave a vivid account of Beijing’s history. To my excitement, on a huge map I could even find what my local area was like years ago. How incredible to have hutongs transformed into high-rise buildings.

The hall displayed more than just the history of Beijing. In a documentary entitled “Beautiful Beijing”, we learned in amazement how Beijing has become a modern city with giant skyscrapers and new landmarks. Afterwards, following the docent, we came to an urban planning model which displayed a more vibrant Beijing with buildings, transportation and facilities planned for the future.

Before leaving, I left a message on the board, expressing my best wishes to my hometown. Then I headed home with a smile as well as a wonderful picture of Beijing’s future in mind.(182 words)

【解析】本文書面表達(dá)屬于看圖作文，要求寫一封稿件。

第1步：根據(jù)提示可知，本篇是要求寫一封稿件：假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高二（1）班學(xué)生李華。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序，給21世紀(jì)英文報(bào)寫一封稿件，介紹上周你班同學(xué)參觀北京市規(guī)劃展覽館（Beijing Planning Exhibition Hall）的全過(guò)程。

第2步：根據(jù)寫作要求確定關(guān)鍵詞，如：Beijing Planning Exhibition Hall（北京市規(guī)劃展覽館）； urban planning model沙盤；docent講解員；To my excitement（使某人興奮的是）；transformed into（被改造成）；left a message on the board（在留言板上留下信息）等。

第3步：根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)語(yǔ)態(tài)問(wèn)題。

第4步：連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過(guò)渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的。

本文內(nèi)容完整，語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，符合圖畫內(nèi)容，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)。另外全文中沒(méi)有中國(guó)式英語(yǔ)的句式，顯示了很高的駕馭英語(yǔ)的能力。